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Lemon Cake

I savor the creamy batter. Divining of lemony cast. Layer cake that’s sure to flatter. This sumptuous treat will not last. The melt of his eyes, when he asked. I squeeze, like a sponge, yellow fruit. Up and down zest the bodysuit. Ring’d finger frosted quick submit. Temptation of icing acute. Chocolate, curled white, atop it. 5/5/2020 Dizain - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart
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Date: 5/28/2020 7:22:00 AM
ahh, mouth-watering!! Such a delectable piece.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2020 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, JCB
Date: 5/24/2020 6:58:00 AM
Sounds tempting, delicious and with a romantic flavor to go with it, Kim. I see that congratulations (albeit belated) are in order...well done! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 5/22/2020 7:45:00 AM
Kim, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Constance! <3
Date: 5/21/2020 1:57:00 AM
I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful win Kim! Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! xxoo
Date: 5/20/2020 12:05:00 AM
I could savor your poetry with the delicious imagery. Congratulations on your win Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 7:50:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 5/19/2020 1:52:00 PM
Was so happy to see your delicious, and mouth watering, poem on the winners list, Kim. Back to say congratulations on your yummy poem. Maybe I'll bake some lemon bars with lemons given to us! Thank you for the inspiration.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I hope you do enjoy some fresh lemon bars!
Date: 5/16/2020 8:28:00 AM
One of my favs is a lemon sponge cake...what a lovely picture you baked! congrats on POD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne!
Date: 5/13/2020 2:15:00 PM
I love lemon cakes, and pies they are so great along with lemon bread. You got me wanting to bake one.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 5:36:00 PM
So good! It was fun baking from scratch!
Date: 5/10/2020 1:51:00 PM
Imagination and fascination lead to POTD - Jubilation - my friend, congratulations. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2020 2:41:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 5/10/2020 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on POTD..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2020 10:40:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/9/2020 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautifully sweet POTD. A wonderful confection of imagery.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2020 3:36:00 PM
Thank you, JC!
Date: 5/8/2020 8:13:00 PM
I just bought a lemon cake yesterday Kim. Yummy! Great penmanship! Congratulations on having this poem honored with POTD! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2020 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 5/7/2020 5:38:00 PM
Lemon cake... Wow
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 5:58:00 PM
Was delicious!
Date: 5/7/2020 1:23:00 PM
Sweet Poem on sweet cake. All the best
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha!
Date: 5/7/2020 2:15:00 AM
You know what they say, when life gives you lemons, make lemon cake... big congrats on your fun and tasty potd today, Kim! Lemon cake is my favorite!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 7:15:00 AM
Thank you, John! :)
Date: 5/6/2020 8:41:00 PM
wow...I have to agree with Brandy...I always loved lemon cake and you make it sound sexy and tempting... love this, congrats on your potd :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:47:00 PM
I told my husband - see what you’ve been missing all these years. But alas I will have to work. Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 5/6/2020 8:28:00 PM
Oh my!!! You make baking a Lemon Cake sound so exciting. Yummy!! I do enjoy a good lemon pie or cake. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:46:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy! My husband made me die the frosting yellow. He was all in :)
Date: 5/6/2020 6:01:00 PM
Great job on your poem Kim! Lemon is my favorite. I had to do some looking but I found some in Fargo today. Yum Congratulations on potd my friend
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:45:00 PM
Very nice, Mark! Thank you!
Date: 5/6/2020 5:40:00 PM
Now if I can finish the tunnel, escape confinement, cut the line at the grocery store, disenfect everything before sneaking back into the house...and then find the recipe...I will join you in sated solitude
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:44:00 PM
LOL! We keep a running list and my husband goes. There is no running to the store whenever we feel like it. Thank you, John!
Date: 5/6/2020 4:54:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD and a tasty poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph!
Date: 5/6/2020 4:37:00 PM
yummy!!! And I see you got a POTD too. BIG congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! xx
Date: 5/6/2020 3:44:00 PM
POTD for a perfect recipe well done, Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, darling friend!
Date: 5/6/2020 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. When are you cutting the cake???? I want some. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Handing you a virtual slice :)
Date: 5/6/2020 12:00:00 PM
Makes me want lemon anything! yummy Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 12:29:00 PM
Yay! Thank you, Grace!
Date: 5/6/2020 11:41:00 AM
Mmmm! I love anything lemon. Your delicious poem just made my mouth water. Congratulations on your POTD, Kim. Tempting images of sweet cake.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 12:30:00 PM
Thank you! It was good!
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