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Lemon Cake

I savor the creamy batter. Divining of lemony cast. Layer cake that’s sure to flatter. This sumptuous treat will not last. The melt of his eyes, when he asked. I squeeze, like a sponge, yellow fruit. Up and down zest the bodysuit. Ring’d finger frosted quick submit. Temptation of icing acute. Chocolate, curled white, atop it. 5/5/2020 Dizain - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Verified using: Rhymezone, Howmanysyllables, and PS Grammar Checker 8 syllable dizain ababbccdcd

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Jcb Brul

Date: 5/28/2020 7:22:00 AM

ahh, mouth-watering!! Such a delectable piece.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2020 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, JCB

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2020 6:58:00 AM

Sounds tempting, delicious and with a romantic flavor to go with it, Kim. I see that congratulations (albeit belated) are in order...well done! ~ Warm regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 1:08:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

Constance La France

Date: 5/22/2020 7:45:00 AM

Kim, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 1:09:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Constance! <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/21/2020 1:57:00 AM

I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful win Kim! Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2020 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, sweet lady! xxoo

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/20/2020 12:05:00 AM

I could savor your poetry with the delicious imagery. Congratulations on your win Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 7:50:00 AM

Thank you, Aditi!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/19/2020 1:52:00 PM

Was so happy to see your delicious, and mouth watering, poem on the winners list, Kim. Back to say congratulations on your yummy poem. Maybe I'll bake some lemon bars with lemons given to us! Thank you for the inspiration.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2020 3:30:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! I hope you do enjoy some fresh lemon bars!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/16/2020 8:28:00 AM

One of my favs is a lemon sponge cake...what a lovely picture you baked! congrats on POD.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Jeanne!

Bette Bavington

Date: 5/13/2020 2:15:00 PM

I love lemon cakes, and pies they are so great along with lemon bread. You got me wanting to bake one.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 5:36:00 PM

So good! It was fun baking from scratch!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/10/2020 1:51:00 PM

Imagination and fascination lead to POTD - Jubilation - my friend, congratulations. Blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2020 2:41:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer!

Silent One

Date: 5/10/2020 9:57:00 AM

Congrats on POTD..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2020 10:40:00 AM

Thank you

Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/9/2020 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your beautifully sweet POTD. A wonderful confection of imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2020 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, JC!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2020 8:13:00 PM

I just bought a lemon cake yesterday Kim. Yummy! Great penmanship! Congratulations on having this poem honored with POTD! xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2020 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/7/2020 5:38:00 PM

Lemon cake... Wow

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 5:58:00 PM

Was delicious!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/7/2020 1:23:00 PM

Sweet Poem on sweet cake. All the best

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 2:34:00 PM

Thanks, Anisha!

John Watt

Date: 5/7/2020 2:15:00 AM

You know what they say, when life gives you lemons, make lemon cake... big congrats on your fun and tasty potd today, Kim! Lemon cake is my favorite!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 7:15:00 AM

Thank you, John! :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 5/6/2020 8:41:00 PM

wow...I have to agree with Brandy...I always loved lemon cake and you make it sound sexy and tempting... love this, congrats on your potd :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:47:00 PM

I told my husband - see what you’ve been missing all these years. But alas I will have to work. Thank you, Sandra!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/6/2020 8:28:00 PM

Oh my!!! You make baking a Lemon Cake sound so exciting. Yummy!! I do enjoy a good lemon pie or cake. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy! My husband made me die the frosting yellow. He was all in :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/6/2020 6:01:00 PM

Great job on your poem Kim! Lemon is my favorite. I had to do some looking but I found some in Fargo today. Yum Congratulations on potd my friend

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:45:00 PM

Very nice, Mark! Thank you!

John Lawless

Date: 5/6/2020 5:40:00 PM

Now if I can finish the tunnel, escape confinement, cut the line at the grocery store, disenfect everything before sneaking back into the house...and then find the recipe...I will join you in sated solitude

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2020 10:44:00 PM

LOL! We keep a running list and my husband goes. There is no running to the store whenever we feel like it. Thank you, John!