Lego Play

Jane and John with legos played.
They built a tiny city.
But along their big dog came.
Oh, my, it was a pity.

Their pet dog ran through the room.
Their city got knocked down.
They locked that dog out of their room
and built a brand new town!
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Date: 11/30/2023 2:35:00 AM
Brilliant! Congratulations.
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Date: 11/29/2023 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/creative~story/write. Dogs will do that... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Date: 11/29/2023 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win with nice short poem,
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Date: 11/29/2023 8:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the LEGO contest, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 11/29/2023 8:04:00 AM
Well written poem, Andrea, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/21/2023 7:01:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hello. I can see I missed many of your entries. I started with this entry because the title caught my eye. How cute is this entry. Very. And yes, with the new town as is well. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. I hope all is well. Have a wonderful day. Happy Thanksgiving. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:44:00 PM
All part of the fun.
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Date: 11/10/2023 6:00:00 PM
Ha! Very sweet!
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Date: 11/10/2023 4:28:00 PM
I absolutely love this! Great job!
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Date: 11/10/2023 4:09:00 PM
A town without a dog? Unthinkable! LOL A fun one, Andrea:)
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Date: 11/10/2023 9:31:00 AM
This is so very cute and lovely, lego ambience so well delivered: your rhymes they flow so seamlessly! You definitely are a natural with them and also creative storytelling. I love reading your poems. Sending you light always.
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Date: 11/10/2023 4:45:00 AM
Ahh, the magic of rebuilding with legos. Fun poem.
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Date: 11/9/2023 8:11:00 PM
Fun poem, Andrea. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
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