Lego Play

Jane and John with legos played.
They built a tiny city.
But along their big dog came.
Oh, my, it was a pity.

Their pet dog ran through the room.
Their city got knocked down.
They locked that dog out of their room
and built a brand new town!
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Miller Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 2:35 AM
Brilliant! Congratulations.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/creative~story/write. Dogs will do that... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
Narain Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on your win with nice short poem,
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:54 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the LEGO contest, Andrea :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Well written poem, Andrea, congratulations on your win.
Ricci Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 7:01 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hello. I can see I missed many of your entries. I started with this entry because the title caught my eye. How cute is this entry. Very. And yes, with the new town as is well. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. I hope all is well. Have a wonderful day. Happy Thanksgiving. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 3:44 PM
All part of the fun.
Hind Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Ha! Very sweet!
Hawley Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:28 PM
I absolutely love this! Great job!
Turner Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:09 PM
A town without a dog? Unthinkable! LOL A fun one, Andrea:)
Empress Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 9:31 AM
This is so very cute and lovely, lego ambience so well delivered: your rhymes they flow so seamlessly! You definitely are a natural with them and also creative storytelling. I love reading your poems. Sending you light always.
Fisher Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:45 AM
Ahh, the magic of rebuilding with legos. Fun poem.
Baker Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Fun poem, Andrea. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
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