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Legion of Doom

howling black wolves complain to new moon, of devastation wrought by creatures! different from rest in size and shape, walk on two legs, strange hairless features! in packs behind rigid barriers, cunning to modulate world to needs, the rivers run dark under their feet, trees have perished to nourish their seeds! clouds now migrate away to the south, it thunders and rains where once desert, vast oceans expand as glaciers melt, cold death now haunts where once birds would nest. hunt us down, say are born of devil, spare not a thought for nature’s reasons, we hunt when hungry, the weak and lame, but they kill for game in all seasons! fire horrors ravage homely woods, cuckoo laments morning with its lore, big herds that walked now dress their rooms, world is wounded, earth is bleeding sore! Horror! Horror! we cry to the moon, our laments tear down the dark silence, ruled by these creatures with hearts of stone, they are destructive sans repentance! we fear not ghosts that lurk in the dark, nor dripping blood from a sharpened steel, greater horror lurks where these things haunt, a pestilence that rocks nature’s keel!
Written 3/May/2021 Funom Makama sponsored Horror poetry contest 9 syllables each line- lines2 and 4 rhyme in all quatrains! POTD 05/05/2021
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Peck Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:39 AM
What a wonderful poem! Isn't it the sad truth--the most feared predator of life and land is man. I'm making this a favorite!
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Thanks Ann. Fave is an honour! Thanks.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful and poignant poem ~ it's a jungle out there. Congrats on your POTD, Krish ~
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Thanks Line!:)
Kauffman Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Krish, you have captured the terror and horror of the "dark night of the soul" and imprisoned it in your lines of night and darkness. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on your POTD!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Sam! Delighted to have you stop by! Thanks indeed!
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Back with congratulations on your win Krish, Greetings from the New Forest, Tom.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:02 PM
Thanks tom!! New Forest!! Must be wonderful!!
Mitra Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Awesome write Krish.....Congrats on you win and well deserved POTD.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Thanks Carol! Much obliged!:)
Makama Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:27 AM
Thank you very much for this wonderful entry. I truly enjoyed your work. A big big congratulations to you.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Thanks Funom!:)
Peck Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Scary poem written about truth. Thank you for writing about Nature's dilemma. Your poem deserved POTD. Congrats!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Ann! Very kind of you! my regards!:)
Koplin Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Krish on Potd! Well done and down right bone chilling.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Thanks Mark! Happy to have your visit. Hope you are well.
Seeker Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 2:09 AM
Brilliant write Krish! Congrats on POTD
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Thanks Seeker! Happy you like it.:)
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:24 PM
Wow! Great write, Krish, great for the contest and congratulations on POTD.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Thanks Eve! Happy you like it. Thanks and Kind regards!
Nicole Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 6:48 PM
"We fear not ghosts that lurk in the dark, but a pestilence that rocks nature’s keel!" Oh my ! This is deep and dark. Your thoughts bring a chill. Congratulations Krish, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:30 PM
Thanks Brandy! So pleased to have your thoughts and thanks for such lively comments!
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 5:10 PM
Potent penning, Krish. Bravo on POTD. ~ The Wolf at the Door (lol), gw
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Thanks Gershon! always pleased to have you on my page! thanks my friend!
May Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Powerful write Krish, Congrats on POTD
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Thanks Joseph May! Regards Krish
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Love the howling black wolves and the dark write. Fave....I want to read again! Congratulations on POTD!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Thanks Kim! Honoured you make it Fave!! delighted!:)
Fenn Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:02 PM
Wow Krish! Yes, that’s us destroying our planet. Sorrowful. Congrats on POTD. This poem deserves it!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:06 PM
Thanks Jennifer! The most successful species after bacteria is the most destructive species! Kind regards Krish
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Wow Krish! This is spectacular! I see why it was honored with POTD. From your first stanza to your last it had me captivated. Sadly there are many with hearts of stone who don’t care about the destruction of our planet. Brilliantly written my friend! Congratulations on your honor. I am saving this to my Faves! Blessings xxoo
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Connie Thank you for such a nice compliment and honouring me by adding this to your Fave list!! I am delighted with your words. Also a belated Happy Birthday to you! just saw that on the blog page!:) regards
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 11:48 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Pleased with your visit. Hope you are well!:)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a creative story/write. Have a blessed day writing away............
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thanks Paula! Delighted and happy to hear from you and blessings are most valuable!! My Kind regards!
Jayasankar Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Hearty congrats on your potd with this well written horror poem Krishji... You created wonderful imagery of horror.. Loved your last few lines too... God bless.. ~ Ani
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Anitha! lovely to hear from you! Hope all is well where you live.
Merryman Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Krish, congrats on your POTD with this well written, descriptive poem! Blessings, Kim M
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Dear Kim, thanks and pleased with your congratulatory note! regards Krish
La France Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Krish, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your wonderfully penned horror poem, well done, peace _Constance+
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Constance! delighted, honoured!
Rone Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 7:17 AM
An excellent POTD. Conforming to the contest formula can sometimes seem contrived. This one not so, exciting and inclusive. I loved it.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thanks a lot Ken! your lovely words make my day!!:) Kind regards!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Loved your horror poem.
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Victor! pleased you like it!:)
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations Krish on an excellent potd, one of allusion and horror, if only it was a bad nightmare, but alas its a sad indictment of humanity, cheers David
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thanks David! A happy surprise but delighted! Thanks for your visit.
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May 5, 2021 at 6:15 AM
A marvellous write Krish, it goes without saying who the horrific two legged creatures are destroying this beautiful planet of ours. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Thanks Belle!! Yes delighted to have your visit!:)
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