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howling black wolves complain to new moon, of devastation wrought by creatures! different from rest in size and shape, walk on two legs, strange hairless features! in packs behind rigid barriers, cunning to modulate world to needs, the rivers run dark under their feet, trees have perished to nourish their seeds! clouds now migrate away to the south, it thunders and rains where once desert, vast oceans expand as glaciers melt, cold death now haunts where once birds would nest. hunt us down, say are born of devil, spare not a thought for nature’s reasons, we hunt when hungry, the weak and lame, but they kill for game in all seasons! fire horrors ravage homely woods, cuckoo laments morning with its lore, big herds that walked now dress their rooms, world is wounded, earth is bleeding sore! Horror! Horror! we cry to the moon, our laments tear down the dark silence, ruled by these creatures with hearts of stone, they are destructive sans repentance! we fear not ghosts that lurk in the dark, nor dripping blood from a sharpened steel, greater horror lurks where these things haunt, a pestilence that rocks nature’s keel!
Written 3/May/2021 Funom Makama sponsored Horror poetry contest 9 syllables each line- lines2 and 4 rhyme in all quatrains! POTD 05/05/2021

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Date: 6/1/2021 9:39:00 AM
What a wonderful poem! Isn't it the sad truth--the most feared predator of life and land is man. I'm making this a favorite!
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Date: 6/1/2021 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Ann. Fave is an honour! Thanks.
Date: 5/31/2021 8:47:00 AM
Beautiful and poignant poem ~ it's a jungle out there. Congrats on your POTD, Krish ~
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Date: 5/31/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thanks Line!:)
Date: 5/13/2021 9:08:00 AM
Krish, you have captured the terror and horror of the "dark night of the soul" and imprisoned it in your lines of night and darkness. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 5/13/2021 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Sam! Delighted to have you stop by! Thanks indeed!
Date: 5/12/2021 11:46:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win Krish, Greetings from the New Forest, Tom.
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:02:00 PM
Thanks tom!! New Forest!! Must be wonderful!!
Date: 5/12/2021 9:18:00 AM
Awesome write Krish.....Congrats on you win and well deserved POTD.
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Date: 5/12/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Carol! Much obliged!:)
Date: 5/12/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for this wonderful entry. I truly enjoyed your work. A big big congratulations to you.
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Date: 5/14/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thanks Funom!:)
Date: 5/6/2021 12:25:00 PM
Scary poem written about truth. Thank you for writing about Nature's dilemma. Your poem deserved POTD. Congrats!
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Date: 5/6/2021 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Ann! Very kind of you! my regards!:)
Date: 5/6/2021 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations Krish on Potd! Well done and down right bone chilling.
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Date: 5/6/2021 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Mark! Happy to have your visit. Hope you are well.
Date: 5/6/2021 2:09:00 AM
Brilliant write Krish! Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/6/2021 2:10:00 AM
Thanks Seeker! Happy you like it.:)
Date: 5/5/2021 9:24:00 PM
Wow! Great write, Krish, great for the contest and congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Eve! Happy you like it. Thanks and Kind regards!
Date: 5/5/2021 8:27:00 PM
Wow, Krish, this is a fantastic poem! "Cuckoo laments morning with its lore"! Congrats on your POTD. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:31:00 PM
Thanks Carol! I appreciate your supportive comments! honoured!:)
Date: 5/5/2021 6:48:00 PM
"We fear not ghosts that lurk in the dark, but a pestilence that rocks nature’s keel!" Oh my ! This is deep and dark. Your thoughts bring a chill. Congratulations Krish, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Brandy! So pleased to have your thoughts and thanks for such lively comments!
Date: 5/5/2021 5:10:00 PM
Potent penning, Krish. Bravo on POTD. ~ The Wolf at the Door (lol), gw
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! always pleased to have you on my page! thanks my friend!
Date: 5/5/2021 2:47:00 PM
Powerful write Krish, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/5/2021 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Joseph May! Regards Krish
Date: 5/5/2021 1:32:00 PM
Love the howling black wolves and the dark write. Fave....I want to read again! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/5/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Honoured you make it Fave!! delighted!:)
Date: 5/5/2021 1:02:00 PM
Wow Krish! Yes, that’s us destroying our planet. Sorrowful. Congrats on POTD. This poem deserves it!
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Date: 5/5/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer! The most successful species after bacteria is the most destructive species! Kind regards Krish
Date: 5/5/2021 12:50:00 PM
Wow Krish! This is spectacular! I see why it was honored with POTD. From your first stanza to your last it had me captivated. Sadly there are many with hearts of stone who don’t care about the destruction of our planet. Brilliantly written my friend! Congratulations on your honor. I am saving this to my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/5/2021 1:00:00 PM
Connie Thank you for such a nice compliment and honouring me by adding this to your Fave list!! I am delighted with your words. Also a belated Happy Birthday to you! just saw that on the blog page!:) regards
Date: 5/5/2021 11:48:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Pleased with your visit. Hope you are well!:)
Date: 5/5/2021 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a creative story/write. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thanks Paula! Delighted and happy to hear from you and blessings are most valuable!! My Kind regards!
Date: 5/5/2021 9:12:00 AM
Hearty congrats on your potd with this well written horror poem Krishji... You created wonderful imagery of horror.. Loved your last few lines too... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Anitha! lovely to hear from you! Hope all is well where you live.
Date: 5/5/2021 8:57:00 AM
Krish, congrats on your POTD with this well written, descriptive poem! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/5/2021 9:57:00 AM
Dear Kim, thanks and pleased with your congratulatory note! regards Krish
Date: 5/5/2021 8:39:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your wonderfully penned horror poem, well done, peace _Constance+
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Date: 5/5/2021 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Constance! delighted, honoured!
Date: 5/5/2021 7:17:00 AM
An excellent POTD. Conforming to the contest formula can sometimes seem contrived. This one not so, exciting and inclusive. I loved it.
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Date: 5/5/2021 7:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot Ken! your lovely words make my day!!:) Kind regards!
Date: 5/5/2021 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Loved your horror poem.
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Date: 5/5/2021 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Victor! pleased you like it!:)
Date: 5/5/2021 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations Krish on an excellent potd, one of allusion and horror, if only it was a bad nightmare, but alas its a sad indictment of humanity, cheers David
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Date: 5/5/2021 7:32:00 AM
Thanks David! A happy surprise but delighted! Thanks for your visit.
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