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For silent ones " legend" contest

 

 

To the legend of silence that speaks in trembling stillness I’ve seen your halcyon halo~ that illuminates wilted weeds and tilted tendrils unfolding perfumed wings, allowing sizzling seas of stardust to rise. But something about the way your soft skin caresses my bruised bones, ignites poetic sparks, carving scarlet skies of fears with luminous letters and nomadic numbers. Yet I, the mistress of metaphors, remain hypnotized by the harlequin blades, in your virtuous garden of butterfly serenades, searching for a phrase to describe the selflessness that you portray, through jasmine scented analogies. I empathize with your locked-up tears, cloaked discreetly beneath feathered sunsets, for, in solitude, your soulful song soars, unfolding sorcery from a symphonic tapestry of darkness, like a broken bandit dressed in lion limbs, walking through nocturnal nothingness. I heard the soldier within you shoulders heavy burdens~ as an aquamarine armored savior, to the ones that long for petals of peonies~ that emanate healing through peridot gates of your midnight eyes. Sometimes, I wonder, how you stand so firm, unmoved by the wicked winds, carrying hail of heinous hymns, unfolding your fingers to weave unerasable auroras across greyest horizons, enabling the blind a lilac ladder to the tangerine moon, where flowers flourish like fairy-dust blossoms. If only, you can see yourself, through these words, maybe then, you will realize, your picturesque patience and presence is enough to paint every wrong right, amidst the fickle fog against the sharpness of your sight, I see you as the rainbow star that sprinkles hope, upon my anesthetized heart, there I walk above lunar-kissed ripples, embracing the empathetic silhouette of your tender twilight. Tonight I’ll wear sage to sleep, hug you from miles, let memories of the sun that thawed wintry thoughts be the lullaby, as I look for you, astral waltzing, to place my cheeks within your empyrean embrace, where home is a feeling I find with you.

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Date: 4/10/2024 11:55:00 AM
A wonderful piece, Ink Empress, breaths liken to a dreamy trailing as legends ought to be, steeping idyllic and pastoral passages to a dwelt finale. My compliments on your exquisite winning placement, my friend. Aloha, William
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Date: 4/10/2024 11:47:00 AM
Added to my favs. Amazing concept and execution!
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:18:00 AM
Did you write this to please me? Of course, I am kinda legend of silence :).. Your poem is a poignant exploration of the intricate relationship between silence and the human experience, celebrating its transformative power to heal, inspire, and bring comfort in times of need. Its evocative imagery and heartfelt language create a deeply moving tribute to the enduring beauty and significance of silence in our lives.
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
Date: 4/5/2024 9:51:00 PM
Silence sometimes is gold dear lovely Ink. Very enjoyed read! Have a wonderful time ~AA
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Date: 4/2/2024 4:34:00 PM
What an extremely beautiful way to portray silence. The last verse was personal to me. So many great lines. "That speaks in trembling stillness." I always say silence is the best voice, it speaks so freely and eloquently, you'll be dammed not to understand." "But something about the way your soft skin caresses my bruised bones, ignites poetic sparks." Silence has more words than words itself. And it serenades us with it every second. Lovely write and entry as always dear Ink, Success.
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Date: 4/1/2024 5:05:00 AM
A wonderful prizing of a Legend of Silence who has a halcyon halo around his head. You are very empathetic to him for the silent tears he sheds, discreetly cloaking his pain beneath feathered sunsets.....! In your words, 'a broken bandit dressed in lion limbs, who walks through nocturnal nothingness'. What a powerful image you have drawn of the Legend of Silence! Each word and each metaphor stands out. Love the expression- "peridot gates of your midnight eyes"! Your empathy for the legend turns into love at the end- "I see you as the rainbow star that sprinkles hope, upon my anesthetized heart, there I walk above lunar-kissed ripples, embracing the empathetic silhouette of your tender twilight." Wow.... What a poem.
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:46:00 PM
IE, this was not what I expected when I began reading this. At first, I thought you would describe silence as a phenomenon...sort of a thing that affects all of us as in the silent incongruities of nature itself. But then you began to describe the hurt of silence that might reside within another person--or perhaps in nature itself. This is a complex idea that I have to stop and think about for a while. What it does too is make me sure to express myself to those around me so as not to add pain.
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:21:00 PM
This is so beautiful that I'm nearly crying. A fav- this will haunt me for awhile, lol. Just breathtaking.
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Date: 3/31/2024 12:17:00 PM
This is a truly exceptional tribute to the power of silence, dear Ink. Your masterful use of poetic syntax and powerful imagery captures my broad reverence. It's a remarkable ability to capture the essence of timeless beauty and inspire those who lack vision. It's an idyllic trek that lifts it beyond the shimmering ripples, capturing the delicate essence of a peaceful twilight. This piece is truly remarkable and It's a Fave.
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Date: 3/31/2024 7:56:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. I hope this is the best Easter Sunday for you and yours. Sara K
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Date: 3/31/2024 6:28:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to the legend of silence! Eloquent words of adulation resonate throughout, Ink--in beautiful diction and metaphors.--unfolding your fingers to weave unerasable auroras across greyest horizons, enabling the blind a lilac ladder to the tangerine moon---there I walk above lunar-kissed ripples, embracing the empathetic silhouette of your tender twilight---simply beautiful! A FAVE!
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:53:00 AM
This is so good … beautiful words . Love it
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:13:00 AM
Yes. Silence reflects hope, home, heart,... beautiful as the blushing secret found in whispers rich with light and blessed by the music of sunbeams. Lovely writing. Enjoyed. God bless you this Easter. much love, Gina
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Date: 3/31/2024 1:30:00 AM
how wonderful and subtle declaration images are brilliant. the music is real in every verse, thanks for the beautiful melody for the heart have a sweet sunday
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Date: 3/30/2024 10:55:00 PM
Ahhh..your words always dig deep within me..speaking my soul language in so many ways. The layers to your poem is truly mesmeric and divine! The poetic finesse within your heart soul and mind is truly dynamic! As I’ve always said, you are a poetic soul..walking talking breathing poetic essence. The words used and the imagery one swims in, feeling all the emotions and the sentiments in this brilliance is so very Chasmic! I get lost in the feelings and the beauty and grace of your poetry..
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 3/30/2024 10:59:00 PM
The melodic lyricism..the light and dark that’s truly symbolic, drowns us with the ups and downs, the love that conquers all..having a soul that understands us, that’s on our side in all aspects, our person who exudes compassion and lifts us to unfathomable heights. This piece truly brought tears to my eyes, my beautiful soul sis! And this one is etched in my soul! A true masterpiece!
Date: 3/30/2024 10:53:00 PM
legend of silence that speaks in trembling stillness… set the tone up really nice aee papi.. sizzling seas of stardust to rise. carving scarlet skies of fears with luminous letters and nomadic numbers..Oo brilliant alliterations!! unfolding your fingers to weave unerasable auroras across greyest horizons, mmm love the descriptive imagery.. hug you from miles, let memories of the sun that thawed wintry thoughts be the lullaby.. awwwn .. oooo..home is a feeling I find with you. Love that feeling!!
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