Legend Has It You'Re a Myth

Legend has it you’re a myth
but I remember, we once kissed,
not so very long ago, 
beneath shooting stars and falling snow. 

You were more mystical than I back then, 
my secret shadow and dearest friend,
searching the heavens and in between
life and death for things unseen.

I remember how you came and left 
like a spirit on a travel quest,
for something only angels bare 
wanting more than I could share.  

In this or any other place   
I fell for you and your covered face,
and nothing more than the love you swore,  
for me was like a swinging door.  

The way you teased and pleased me then
as if in a dream and tail head-spin,
more than any one’s reality could take,
to survive, I surmised you were all but fake.   

Beguiling with your childish charms
like a black hole pulled me in beyond,
the piercing stare of your sweet, snake eyes
blinding me with your deep disguise.
 
Dancing, prancing, romancing, like a queen
of hearts and minds, you were killing me,
day by day and night by night,  
loving you was a yearning, burning, dismal delight.   

Full of anger, worship, and whispered dreams
that someday you might marry me,
still deceived and full of grace, 
I prayed someday we would embrace.  

Until you vanished like a splendid swan
as I watched your wake dissipate ‘till you were gone...
into a legendary land I’m told comes and goes,
like shooting stars and falling snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/24/2023 8:39:00 AM
wow, if this person is not an actual legend in your area, she was certainly legendary for you. It's how I feel for a special guy who was in my life all too briefly as well. GREAT poem.
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Terrell Martin
Date: 6/24/2023 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea and what a pleasure hearing from again! With apologies, I've been away too long. And to be clear, she was a mix of both the real AND the legendary. Glad it touched your sweet heart. Wishing you the BEST, Terry
Date: 6/22/2023 7:58:00 PM
Hi Terrell, this is lovely, the meter and rhymes come together so effortlessly, and the ending line repeating from the first stanza, I feel the longing for unrequited love here~
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Date: 6/22/2023 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle, your comment means more than you know because I just began writing again after a considerable time away. Your thoughts are encouraging, and I'll be sure to follow you here in PSoup. Thx again, Terrell
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