Notes About The Poem

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                  - Do you remember the song ?

                       

                   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rYoRaxgOE0

- Legal - Pleiades L -

Lollipop Lollipop
Lips pink and crystal skies,
like a lovely daydream
Little sweetness in life
Large to share, I'm right here
Laughter ... and sweet flirting
La, la ... a rumbling song










15.04.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
( Pleiades form : L )
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Great poem about the song! Congratulations on your win Sunshine! :-)
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 12:43 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 3:24 AM
Swinging back around to congratulate you on your win, Lisa. Well done! Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 3:02 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on your nice win ... Very cute ...
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 11:29 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Cute and light-hearted! Congrats on your win, Anne-Lise! Blessings, Kim
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Thanks for my win, Kim - Nice to participate in your contests :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Cute! Congrats, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 3:33 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hoffman Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Belated congratulations on a sweet lollipop write Anne-Lise! hugs~Che :)
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 3:33 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, Sunshine! Janice
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 3:32 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 6:37 AM
Not too sure I do know this song, but the lollipop looks tempting. A tasty write. Hugs and a 7
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 3:32 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and visit, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 3:48 AM
Congrats on your win Anne
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 4:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 2:43 AM
I wonder where did she buy that neckless? I want one. Congratulations right back at you Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 2:52 AM
- Sweet neckless :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Congrats to you on your win, Anne-Lise! And yes, I do remember the song! Haha. Have a lovely day.
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 2:27 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 8:16 PM
So sweet!!!! Tell me who are you? As long as its between 1 and 4!!!!! not more!!! LOL HUgs
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 1:09 AM
- Thanks for the warm hearted visit and lovely comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Beaufort Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Crazy way he thrills me--I'll tell you why... The Chordettes link was well worth exploring. I've seen some of these before, and I have to thank you for bringing this up. The words and music seem funny, but they are creative and mark the period produced clearly.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 2:09 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comments, Duke :) - Always nice to see you on my poems - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Brilliant Pleiades, great theme, good luck in contest. :))
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:36 AM
- Always nice to see you on my poems Roy, I enjoy your comments :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Great poem and picture. I would say barely legal. Thanks for your visit this morning.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:34 AM
- Richard, a pleasure with your visit and your comments - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 10:19 AM
A sweet song Anne..GL in the contest
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:33 AM
- Thanks for the friendly comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dalei Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Dear Anne, The sweetness of lollipop is really very nice. A beautiful poetry. A7..................//hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:32 AM
- Many thanks for your comments a 7 and friendly visit, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 6:35 AM
A little naughtiness with this one, Anne-Lise ;) Cheeky and well-written - all the best for the contest! Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:31 AM
- Only a innocent sweet flirt :) - Many thanks for your comments and friendly visit, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 2:07 AM
Festive and delightful poem, a real sweet treat my dear, Anne-Lise! A 7! Have a blessed day. Hugs!
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:30 AM
- A pleasure with your visit a 7 and your comments, many thanks Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 1:17 AM
Excellent. Very refreshing Pleiades and penned well. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 11:28 AM
- Thanks for the friendly comments, Ravi :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 12:48 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, It was my pleasure to read this "sweet" write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 1:08 PM
- Alexis, many thanks for your comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marie Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Your words convey sheer joy in the moment Anne-Lise:) A captivating write uniquely penned. blessings xxx
Marie Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 8:07 PM
ooh, an extra smile...thank you Anne-Lise xxx:)
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 1:06 PM
"- Crazy way he thrills me - Tell you why - Just like a lightning from the sky - He loves to kiss me till I can't see straight - Gee, my lollipop is great - " .... Always nice to see you on my poems, I enjoy your comments Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Very refreshing pleiades, Anne-lise:) great picture too:)
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 12:56 PM
- Many thanks for your comments and friendly visit, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 9:01 AM
This is lovely, fresh and quite original, Anne-Lise! I love it:) To be on the safe side...is that 'teaser' 18 or over!? ~ Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 12:52 PM
- She is more 18 years .... but, that means nothing nowadays in 2017, Paul :))) - A pleasure with your visit and your comments, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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