Left To Chance

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tapestry of thoughts woven in the loneliness of twilight about her. the "what if" regrets assailing his mind; encounter... went nowhere. unrevealed, his true feelings for her; the... one that got away. (yalto) "yalto" is a form invented by yours truly lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 02/03/2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/4/2022 4:42:00 PM

Intriguing form and poem, Edward. Write On! Bill

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/4/2022 4:58:00 PM

Thank you very much, Bill;-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/3/2022 3:42:00 PM

What if regrets stay with us--a poignant write on unresolved emotions. True to life.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/4/2022 4:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/3/2022 2:52:00 PM

Hello Edward, sometimes the person does not know they found the real person in their life. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/4/2022 11:04:00 AM

Hello Edward, yes people domiss their opportunities when it comes to having the right person in their life. Blessing my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/3/2022 3:10:00 PM

Very true. Ah, missed opportunities! Thanks for dropping by as always, Darlene:-)