Notes About The Poem

Left To Chance

tapestry 
     of thoughts woven 
          in the 
               loneliness of 
                    twilight about her. 

the "what if"
     regrets 
          assailing
               his mind;
                    encounter...

went nowhere. 
     unrevealed, 
          his true feelings for her; 
               the...
                    one that got away. 
                    
       (yalto)

"yalto" is a form invented by yours truly 
lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables 
Date written: 02/03/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 4:42 PM
Intriguing form and poem, Edward. Write On! Bill
Ibeh Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Thank you very much, Bill;-)
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:42 PM
What if regrets stay with us--a poignant write on unresolved emotions. True to life.
Ibeh Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 4:59 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 2:52 PM
Hello Edward, sometimes the person does not know they found the real person in their life. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 4, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Hello Edward, yes people domiss their opportunities when it comes to having the right person in their life. Blessing my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 3:10 PM
Very true. Ah, missed opportunities! Thanks for dropping by as always, Darlene:-)
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