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Left Hands With Purpose

From the train platform I see you
Actually - all are watching
As rap music blares from a dark blue Hyundai
All of you sing out the words with a special attitude – 
“In my Mercedes”
Four boys standing in oversized khakis – each one
His left hand clutches the zipper area of his pants- tightly
You hold them up – but to avoid what?
The falling?  – I do not think so
Each left hand has a purpose now
You are free and brave 
I envy your purpose 
And there on the train platform – I declare – in my mind only  
One day – I too will be brave and dedicate my life to holding my pants up
And giving my left hand a meaningful purpose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/23/2017 1:32:00 AM
Wow, what a wonderful metaphor, and this is a great poem, so well written. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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