Leaving My Dna

I leave DNA here, there and the other.
In fingernail clippings and hair of my brother.
If there's a murder, we'll be in trouble.
Especially me, for I have a twin double.
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George Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 9:29 PM
If you leave your DNA, I want to save it for my children and grandchildren to acquire your sprightly spirits Caren !
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 11:11 PM
What a gracious and lovely comment Valsa
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Too funny!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:35 PM
And true Kim, incredibly true.
Hankins Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Good one, Caren. I'm wondering (and I really don't know) whether you and your twin have the exact same DNA?
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Yes we are IDENTICAL twins which means our egg started out as one person, and when the egg split, our DNA was also identical.
Kalita Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:40 AM
Love the concrete imageries. Awesome catharsis!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Thank you Silpika.
Hawkins Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM
Double Trouble...
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Exactly! We have a twin silent laugh that goes on for hours and scares the rest of the relatives.
Baker Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Clever fun rhyme, Caren. Fun to read. A poet friend, Bill
Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Thank you Bill.
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