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Leaving 2012

Days leaking Like water from your palms As time goes by My friend Wake up every morning with a new dream And go to sleep every night With an old longing This is the simple secret of life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/19/2013 8:46:00 PM
Where have you gone?? I am seeking out poets who have gone away and asking if you would like to put a favorite poem of mine , your Bonsai poem into my current FAVES contest (check the Soup contest page) it will fill up fast but if you would like to do it, hope you will.
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Date: 12/15/2012 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Betim xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 12:31:00 AM
I enjoyed this one and the brevity of it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/14/2012 8:44:00 PM
Betim, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA
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Date: 12/14/2012 6:43:00 PM
thank you' Sandy
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