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Leaves Like Kites

.                forceful winds swirling
                          leaves like kites with jet packs fly
                             fighting their demise

***Entered in the autumn contest sponsored by Rick Parise.

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Poet Destroyer A

September 2, 2010 at 6:28 PM

A wonderful poem, Doris. Lovely image what a way to express the new season, is in the air,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2010 at 10:54 PM

good image, they are fighting their demise!!

Constance La France

August 31, 2010 at 6:27 AM

I just love to walk in nature when the leaves are flying like kites, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~

Harry Horsman

August 31, 2010 at 2:25 AM

good luck in contest Doris, enjoyed this poem, i like all the lines, Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 30, 2010 at 5:58 PM

Nice images describing the leaves, Doris Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 30, 2010 at 3:50 PM

An excellent Haiku for the contest Doris..very expressive and good luck my friend... my wedding photos are now posted.. could only put ten on as the system only lets ten on now..no more..luv.. I had to delete all my Hawaii photos in order to get the wedding photos on..luv..enjoy..