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Leaves Like Kites

. forceful winds swirling leaves like kites with jet packs fly fighting their demise ***Entered in the autumn contest sponsored by Rick Parise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 9/2/2010 6:28:00 PM
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A wonderful poem, Doris. Lovely image what a way to express the new season, is in the air,..p.d.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/31/2010 10:54:00 PM
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good image, they are fighting their demise!!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/31/2010 6:27:00 AM
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I just love to walk in nature when the leaves are flying like kites, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~
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Harry Horsman
Date: 8/31/2010 2:25:00 AM
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good luck in contest Doris, enjoyed this poem, i like all the lines, Harry
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 8/30/2010 5:58:00 PM
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Nice images describing the leaves, Doris Good luck in the contest
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 8/30/2010 3:50:00 PM
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An excellent Haiku for the contest Doris..very expressive and good luck my friend... my wedding photos are now posted.. could only put ten on as the system only lets ten on now..no more..luv.. I had to delete all my Hawaii photos in order to get the wedding photos on..luv..enjoy..
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Wilma Neels
Date: 8/30/2010 12:27:00 PM
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Doris, you got an excellent entry for the contest.. All the best to you :) love Wilma
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Date: 8/30/2010 11:33:00 AM
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Love this one D. I hope the 'riod you want to give me is an android and not a hemorrhoid
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/30/2010 9:48:00 AM
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Excellent haiku, Doris. I LOVE that second line! Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Audrey Haick
Date: 8/30/2010 9:39:00 AM
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Good luck in the contest, Doris with this wonderful Haiku. ....Audrey
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Francine Roberts
Date: 8/30/2010 8:38:00 AM
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like this, good luck in the contest
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/30/2010 7:16:00 AM
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Reads like a winner to me..Good luck with this well thought out Haiku..Mom(You know the old feeble lady)
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