Leaves In Tanka

Leaves float in the wind
Averse to sitting in trees
Falls on big debris
My dream for palm stays empty
Miss your cup of orange tea 
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20/9/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 2:59 PM
I like the ending on this one! Kind of haiku like also!
Gupta Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:42 AM
Thank you ...
Stebbings Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:23 AM
I like this Tanka, Probir. I could be there. Barry
Gupta Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:30 AM
Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:56 AM
awhh... fascinating tanka filled with sweet sentiments, probir..huggs
Gupta Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Thank you ...
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