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Leaves In Season

Luscious leaves brush against my face, pulsing veins deep enough to trace time with a wind gust embrace. Maroon, copper, gold they dangle glistening to sunset's angle with zeal of wind chime's bangle. Lully leaves descend freestyle becoming a striking pile beaconing a playful smile. Before dried crunches can accrue, lively, I toss a pile at you and you become a child too. 1/21/2021

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Date: 2/8/2021 9:12:00 PM
Loved those leaves!! -Smita
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Date: 1/27/2021 6:45:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 1/27/2021 6:19:00 PM
You become a child too....the last line surely did it for me as I still fool around like this :) Congrats on your win Juliet.
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Date: 1/27/2021 3:13:00 PM
this is just beautiful..an ordinary poetic subject made extraordinary by the striking imagery and the lovely chime of the rhyme..congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 1/23/2021 2:37:00 AM
Your imagery is of the highest degree, and ending on a cute note too. ~~
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Date: 1/22/2021 3:32:00 AM
I love this. Faving it too :) Love and prayers and God bless you
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:49:00 PM
A lovely description of the joy, beauty, and magic that is fall. :=)
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:57:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Juliet--delightful poem.
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:15:00 PM
Lovely, especially the second verse...the colors and the wind chime!
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:48:00 PM
This is pure delight. FAVE
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