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As the swirling winds of autumn Play among the colorful fallen leaves Children’s laughter can be heard Over the swishing of a rake mkt

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Date: 8/30/2017 10:29:00 AM
Hello Michael,I can hear the laughter of children playing in a pile of raked leaves. I do hope that you will write more poetry. I hope you are well,and nothing seriously wrong.
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Date: 1/15/2017 12:09:00 AM
This is really sweet, Michael :)
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Date: 12/20/2016 8:23:00 PM
I read all of your poems. They're wonderful - this free verse is one of my favorites!
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Date: 12/23/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Raven. I appreciate that so very much :)