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to and fro, the winding roads, noise and din, laughing some, some in tears wave to their kin, fresh faces, childhood dreams, away they go, count them in, count them out, so we all know, that somewhere between coldness of bus seats, not lone in fear, is a little heart beat! 10 syllables each line aabbccdd rhyme pattern

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David Smith

Date: 4/22/2024 10:51:00 AM

Hopefully this poem will make a difference to at least one life. No doubt in my mind it will make more think about their actions. Like the way you produced this piece to give a message not a lecture. keep your style. It works for you, Best regards David in NZ

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/22/2024 2:22:00 PM

Dear David Thanks very much for your kind words! Appreciate your visit and your support. BW Krish

Miranda Hawley

Date: 4/21/2024 4:32:00 PM

You have a colorful description there starting with your very first line. "Count them in, count them out..." Anyways congratulations on your win in this contest.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/21/2024 10:44:00 PM

Thanks Miranda. Much appreciated!