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For Charles Messina's The Beatles - Lay It To Me Poetry Contest/ June 4, 2025

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Inspired by Beatles' song: "Leave My Kitten Alone" (Recently edited. The last line got left off.) You petted her, then got bitten. Who said you could touch my kitten? She doesn’t like you, can’t you see? She’ll only roll her ball with me! Your cat nip won’t even tempt her. Back off. Take that stuff away, sir. Buster, "leave my kitten alone." Go and get a cat of your own.

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Date: 6/15/2025 1:58:00 AM
This is adorable and a shock to me. Shock because I didn't think a Beatle's song existed that I wasn't familiar with. I've no memory of that song or title whatsoever. I will have to find it and listen in an attempt to hush the noisy clatter of confusion in my brain's music library. Strawberry fields forever ... CayCay
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:48:00 PM
I am a big Beatles fan. I was 11 yrs old when they "invaded" America
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Date: 6/9/2025 1:10:00 AM
I am a big fan of The Beatles but not familiar with this one. Good poem though I am not a cat fancier. Good luck for contest
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/9/2025 4:34:00 PM
you are not a Beatles fan?? I was a kid when they were popular and I was more into herman's hermits and other bubblegum music, but today I really value what they did for the 60's scene.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/9/2025 4:33:00 PM
I never heard of it before either. but I sure loved that title!!
Date: 6/5/2025 7:48:00 PM
Love the edgy, 'chip-on-the-shoulder' attitude in this one, Andrea. ~ Mr. Keep-Away
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/9/2025 4:34:00 PM
thanks so much
Date: 6/5/2025 1:38:00 PM
Never heard the song; and I'm a fan. I don't get back here much But I'm trying.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/9/2025 4:34:00 PM
thanks, John
Date: 6/5/2025 10:12:00 AM
Nice poem! I don’t know that song either!
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Date: 6/5/2025 1:51:00 AM
Never heard this song. Still cats don't tempt me. My daughter has two. At least they don't smell.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/5/2025 10:12:00 AM
Haha Victor!
Date: 6/4/2025 3:51:00 PM
My favorite line is "Your cat nip won't even tempt her." Oh yeah, I should likely look up the song to hear it for the first time ever.
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Date: 6/4/2025 12:35:00 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away........
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/4/2025 12:42:00 PM
thanks
Date: 6/4/2025 12:29:00 PM
Haha! So cute!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/4/2025 12:42:00 PM
thanks!
Date: 6/4/2025 11:38:00 AM
Lol thats so cute! I didnt know beatles sang this song. Iv been to the beatles museum and love some of their songs. I guess no matter what age we are we can share sometimes same taste in music! Iv never tried this form maybe might do. You always are good at humor sweet andrea Pleasure reading. Best wishes. Sending you light always. Will read your other poems soon too Hugsz
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/4/2025 12:19:00 PM
I never knew the song either, but I saw it on the list of their songs and loved the idea of doing a poem around that title. It was such fun.

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