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Leave In Our Wake

Leave In Our Wake wisdom in years and growing old can't even take a single step to hold without let one go nagging fear I do not know a loud crop-dusting sound of gold 6/6/2017

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Date: 6/13/2017 2:32:00 AM
Great limerick, Eve. Thanks for sharing. Regards, John.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2017 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, John, I assume, if you are not old they will not understand the meaning.
Date: 6/11/2017 10:53:00 AM
as a country boy who is getting old myself....people dont understand why i Pray for death....not suicide because that leads to hell....but He Gave me a Message and i will not fail....to simply do what He Told me to....which is He Loves us all, the rest is up to you....very inspiring write mrs roper....i always be forgetting to put the r in mrs....but thats just me being lazy i guess....lol
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/11/2017 12:32:00 PM
I don't mine, Eric, as we get older things cannot be helped they just occur on their own with out our permission.
Date: 6/9/2017 9:18:00 AM
GOTD! (Giggle of the day award). Was it Confucius who said, "Always stay upwind from senior citizens?" :-) Cheerios ~ j
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/9/2017 11:41:00 AM
hahaha, so right
Date: 6/7/2017 2:13:00 PM
- Well written, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 12:43:00 AM
Excellent. Nicely done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/9/2017 11:42:00 AM
thank you, Ravi ~*
Date: 6/6/2017 5:04:00 PM
Food for thought here Eve. Should do well.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/7/2017 8:55:00 PM
A lot of food for thought :-)
Date: 6/6/2017 8:01:00 AM
Keep flying and dusting the crops...love that metaphor....PHHHHHHHtttt
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 8:13:00 AM
John, I enjoyed your poem I and had to follow suit . ~*
Date: 6/6/2017 7:25:00 AM
really nicely done Eve. Best wishes in the contest
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Chris, I'm not a funny person, I tried... ~*

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