Learning How To Give

This windfall came from out of the blue
I knew I could well spend it
But then the more I thought it through
I thought perhaps I'd lend it

So I was walking through my town
And stopped in for a bite
When on my way to go sit down
Something caught my sight

There on the counter sat a jar
With a note taped to it's side
Said "they really need a car
So they can take a ride

To the hospital in the city
To see their little girl
Who used to be so pretty
Now she hasn't so much as a curl"

It touched my heart to hear this tale
A child with cancer spread
I knew I'd help them without fail
To get to their child's sick bed

After all it's only money I thought
I needed to be kind
So before noon their car was bought
And them I went to find

They cried with relief and thanked me so
I told them not to worry
I gave them the keys and told them "go
You really need to hurry"

Well,long story short,the little one made it
She now is in remission
As for their friendship,I wouldn't trade it
And I don't want recognition

They said I was an earth angel here
And to them I was the best
As I wiped away a single tear
I said I'm the one who's blessed





** for contest "I Helped The Needy"
sponsored by Carol Brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 2:07 PM
wonderful lesson for all to learn congrad's on your write winning! Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 12:44 PM
A very touching story about the girl with cancer and the needs of her family. Beautifully written and so worthy of its win. Congratulations, Deb! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Haya Deb Congratulations on your poem's honored win in Carol's great idea for contest. Agape, Moses
Pettit Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Deb, congratulations on winning in Carol's contest with this fine entry. It has your usual great descriptiveness and rhyming.
Johnson Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 3:50 PM
And it is a blessing to be able to be the giver. congratulaitons on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this spectacular and sensitive write my friend.. enjoy another great success with luv..
Mehta Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Accept my congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deb
Brown Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations Deb on your placement in my contest "I Helped The Needy". Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 2:30 AM
Such a heart warming story, excellent piece and entry for the contest.
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