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Learning How To Give

This windfall came from out of the blue I knew I could well spend it But then the more I thought it through I thought perhaps I'd lend it So I was walking through my town And stopped in for a bite When on my way to go sit down Something caught my sight There on the counter sat a jar With a note taped to it's side Said "they really need a car So they can take a ride To the hospital in the city To see their little girl Who used to be so pretty Now she hasn't so much as a curl" It touched my heart to hear this tale A child with cancer spread I knew I'd help them without fail To get to their child's sick bed After all it's only money I thought I needed to be kind So before noon their car was bought And them I went to find They cried with relief and thanked me so I told them not to worry I gave them the keys and told them "go You really need to hurry" Well,long story short,the little one made it She now is in remission As for their friendship,I wouldn't trade it And I don't want recognition They said I was an earth angel here And to them I was the best As I wiped away a single tear I said I'm the one who's blessed ** for contest "I Helped The Needy" sponsored by Carol Brown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2011 2:07:00 PM
wonderful lesson for all to learn congrad's on your write winning! Light & Love
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:44:00 PM
A very touching story about the girl with cancer and the needs of her family. Beautifully written and so worthy of its win. Congratulations, Deb! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:33:00 PM
Haya Deb Congratulations on your poem's honored win in Carol's great idea for contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:46:00 PM
Deb, congratulations on winning in Carol's contest with this fine entry. It has your usual great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 2/16/2011 3:50:00 PM
And it is a blessing to be able to be the giver. congratulaitons on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/16/2011 2:46:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this spectacular and sensitive write my friend.. enjoy another great success with luv..
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Date: 2/16/2011 2:24:00 PM
Accept my congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 2/16/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations Deb on your placement in my contest "I Helped The Needy". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2011 2:30:00 AM
Such a heart warming story, excellent piece and entry for the contest.
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