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Ants exemplify diligence With their labor-propped persistence Smiting attacking indolence Amidst united resilience… They don’t starve when there’s pestilence Since they work against virulence Warning laziness’ insistence To flee from crises’ prevalence… Learning from insects’ competence Rebukes me of my negligence I confess industry-pretense “Help me, Lord, to fight impotence.”
*Proverbs 6:6 Go to the ant, thou sluggard; consider her ways, and be wise. Proverbs 30:25 The ants are a people not strong, yet they prepare their meat in the summer. January 19, 2022 1st place, "A STRAND (1057)" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/22/2022.

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Date: 1/24/2022 11:57:00 AM
I have read your work that is on the winners' list and find it worthy of the placement. Congrats..Sara. Your faith-based works always inspire me.
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:55:00 AM
Beata, a wonderfully expressed warning based on Scripture. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/23/2022 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful prayer at the end. Great work. Congratulations!
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