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Learning From Mistakes

Life is filled with choices And we pick the ones we get Though quite often we hear voices Filled with longing and regret. We cannot undo decisions That were carelessly selected For we’re not allowed revisions And must stick with those elected. Still, with much deliberation We can learn from our mistakes And provide defibrillation For the heart that nearly breaks. So, since time will keep advancing We must not let hope get lost. There may yet be cause for dancing If we keep our fingers crossed.

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Date: 1/9/2019 7:19:00 PM
---fingers crossed, but not eyes either. They should never be crossed, only dotted. (T's get crossed). LOL. Nice one, Ilene. Thank God, hope is eternal... ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:01:00 PM
On my Valentine poem. It's based on my experience with certain married friends who fit my description in the poem! Yes, I am at times cynical, but it's not a dominant trait/ I do enjoy doing good things for others. I can't imagine myself not doing this when opportunity avails itself. Thanks for reading it. / M
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Date: 1/8/2019 7:57:00 PM
Of course, you're right, Ilene, though when I look at human history I see many of the same mistakes repeated, at tikes with greater intensity and determination. I take comfort from a verse in Jeremiah that says: It does not belong to Man to guide his own steps. Human history bears witness to that amply. Thanks for reading about the upstart socialite and her invited "nuts." / M
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Date: 1/8/2019 5:00:00 PM
Fingers crossed, but not legs! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/8/2019 2:55:00 PM
Loved this! Very well written. :)
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Date: 1/8/2019 2:32:00 PM
I love how this poem inspires hope in the end Ilene. Like the old saying "if we don't learn from our mistakes we are bound to repeat them'. Excellent advice! : ) xxoo
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