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Leap

River rushing River rushing Swim Leap Swim Leap River rushing River rushing Swim Leap Swim Leap River rushing Leap Though obstacles may wait, if you choose to swim against the current You must frequently leap out of the water to make true progress

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005


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Beata Agustin
Date: 11/4/2023 7:48:00 AM
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Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Michelle Morris
Date: 8/5/2023 2:18:00 PM
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Thanks for sharing this reminder. It's difficult to swim against the current like the salmon, but it is definitely worth it. Take care and stay safe. Enjoy your weekend. :-)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/8/2022 2:28:00 PM
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Greetings Mark, A thought provoking piece in which your final prose lines reveal a fundamental truth - that the metaphorical rushing water of lives lived need to be skirted if we are to advance. A truly fine read. All the best, Brian
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 6/26/2021 11:11:00 PM
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the obstacle will come in turns but have to be confident that you have to overcome all obstacles
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Date: 1/9/2021 12:52:00 PM
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The Song of Salmon. Determination, perseverence and success. Great piece of brevity. Mark. Worth reading twice.
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 10/17/2020 10:15:00 PM
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LEAP; IN THE RIVER OF LIFE HAS MANY OBSTACLES; LEAP TO OVERCOME ALL...... LEAP TECHNICALLY
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Team Poetrysoup
Date: 4/21/2017 5:14:00 AM
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Nice
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Skat A
Date: 5/18/2015 1:47:00 PM
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NICE TO SEE THIS FEATURED. SKAT
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