Leap

Two year olds leap before they look DADDY! replaces gravity then writhe laughing from your arms AGAIN! I’ll always catch you for these moments pass too soon.

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Janet Grace

Date: 2/24/2017 10:47:00 AM

So charming...my eyes misted with the memories of my own.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/26/2017 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Janet

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/21/2017 11:30:00 AM

A lovely write! Full of bounce and heart :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/22/2017 1:29:00 PM

Thanks Maureen

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/21/2017 1:43:00 AM

Lovely writing. You have captured the emotion beautifully, such a treasured playful moment :-) Wonderfully expressed, truly a joy to read :-) Congratulations on the feature placement. A fave. blessings, lynn

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/22/2017 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Lynn

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 2/20/2017 1:36:00 AM

How I remember my own children doing this......they grow up far to quickly. Thank you for reminding me of those precious moments.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/20/2017 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Elizabeth