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Leaf

Golden leaf tumbles From the branch onto the ground Crumbles under feet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/6/2010 1:38:00 PM
Line 1 good subject/setting line,line 2 action line/ line 3 the juxtaposition, perhaps, do not use "from" A crisp golden leaf/ tumbles high branch to low ground.../ chips for dinner? see? Not a sentence?
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Date: 11/19/2009 7:42:00 AM
Nicely done Haiku. I can see it fall. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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