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thoughts rested ego falls from tree of life Self shines as God’s light in cave of heart

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Date: 5/8/2025 4:20:00 AM
Dear Seeker, While the prompt is mainstream and common, your poem is different and unique, you delivered something that stands out and is so very soulfully moving and spiritual! So much has been said here in few words for the prompt! How youv written this for the prompt is beyond impressive! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win! Sendinv you light
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Date: 5/8/2025 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, IE
Date: 5/8/2025 1:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful micro poem, U.S. :) - hugs
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Date: 5/8/2025 3:23:00 AM
Thank you, Anne :)
Date: 4/30/2025 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful, all needed said, US, calming elogence.
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Date: 5/8/2025 3:23:00 AM
Yes, I guess the poem summarises the path from ego death to realisation of Self. I’m happy you grasped the essence so easily :)

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