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LEADING VIOLIN The maiden's euphoric fugue The arrogant stretched notes of the violin plague Lightening and softening rough edges mark Blues and browns duet with the sways of thick auburn hair and round voluptuous behind. . . What message she wants to rain? What joy she wants to fire? Or is it wrath she wants to spill? Her libretto casts a paint of dullness around yet, it resurrects her curves to swing... Bareback moans a prudent chaste appeal Vibrato runs along the brush of Sotskova ________________________________________ Inspired by: "LEADING VIOLIN" painting of Lena Sotskova 8:07pm, January 16,2015

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Julia Ward

Date: 3/26/2015 11:18:00 AM

A poem of superlative beauty, Olive. Hugs, Julia, xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 2:20:00 AM

thank you so much Julia. :)! God bless you.. :)!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/27/2015 2:34:00 PM

Beautiful and insightful...I love this one.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 3:39:00 PM

thanks M.L. kiser.. :)! hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 10:22:00 AM

Lena Sotskova is splendid. You are truly an inspired poet.Love Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 11:31:00 PM

thanks much Rajat.. :) I appreciatr your visit:)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/19/2015 11:13:00 PM

I really love your choice of paintings and I love even more what you did with this. Excellent!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 7:00:00 AM

thanks much MAurice.. :)! God bless you. :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/19/2015 9:59:00 AM

"Softening rough edges"....... I love that line !! This is wonderful, and a beautiful match to the portrait !!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 6:54:00 AM

thanks much Carrie.. :)!God bless you always. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2015 2:50:00 PM

Terrific take on the image Olive, glad you liked it. Good luck in the contest, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/19/2015 1:20:00 AM

thanks much James.. :) thanks for sharing it..:) anyway, violin is one if my fave musical instruments.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2015 3:46:00 AM

my, a vivid poem.. mukhang inspired ka with the pope's visit!... how galling, eloi... let me know if you're still here.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/18/2015 4:36:00 AM

thank you NEtte. :)! I appreciate it.. :)! im still here. ;)! hope to see you soon.. ;)!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/17/2015 8:45:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi! I love the movement that you manage to produce with ease of descriptive words and lovely imagery. You even manage to give it a sensual touch. The ending line is perfect. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/18/2015 4:25:00 AM

Thanks much PAul.. :)! i like to produce movements in the words as you can see the the marks down the maiden's skirt... so i want to interpret that what she is playing i a moving piece.. another I saw is the somewhat the shadow of the man behind sitting and somehow his face on his hands...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/18/2015 4:24:00 AM

I gave it a sensual touch because of the woman's bareback plus the fact the violin is one of the musical instruments that when played wholeheartedly it is so sensual and wow... :)!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/16/2015 3:54:00 PM

Very artistic and beautiful poem!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 11:06:00 PM

thankd much buddy Art... :) hope you ok..

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/16/2015 9:18:00 AM

An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page, full of adjectives and superlatives that twist and stretch the imagination in often different directions at once. The words are strung together like a pearl necklace. Well done. Emile. #7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 4:49:00 PM

thankd much Emile.. :)I appreciate your generous comments.. :)

David Meade

Date: 1/16/2015 9:09:00 AM

Wonderful . . . music and life leapt off each word . . . 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 6:52:00 AM

thanks much David.. :) that's my aim in this poem..

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/16/2015 6:57:00 AM

Hi Olive! That was voluptuous and inspiring. I can almost hear the rising music playing and painting lifting from the canvass frame. Have a wonderful day. Earl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 6:48:00 AM

thanks much Earl.. :) I appreciate your comments.. :)! God bless you. :)!