Leading the Way

The distant mountains
peek through layers of gray fog
on this rainy day
Softness surrounds strength above
calm puddles leading the way

Heidi Sands

11/22/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 23, 2019 at 8:07 AM
a tanka full of imagery.. nice one Heidi..
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November 23, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Silent One :) I hope you have a great day!
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November 22, 2019 at 11:09 PM
Lovely... many blessings, Gina
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November 22, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thank you Gina :)
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November 22, 2019 at 3:26 PM
Wonderful tanka my friend!
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November 22, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thank you Caren :)
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November 22, 2019 at 2:58 PM
- Lovely described, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 22, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your support. Have a nice day :)
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November 22, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Beautiful Heidi, we could all use some calm puddles in our lives.
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November 22, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Yes, that is for sure, about the calm puddles Chris. Thank you for your comment. I appreciate your kindness, always :)
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