Leading Behind

the painting of pictures in the minds of readers of words 
Needs wetlip brush stroke consonants as complementary colors
Rhythmic connotation rhymed alliteration as wet accentuation 
so their lack of concentration will allow initiation 
by sleight of hands of invitation to let forgiving magics fluidic
flow in streams of splashing dashing flashing activation 
that lets the wetness of the darkness whisper slithery reactive
to the  painted light of reason reflecting faintly wetly on the wall
Is it really there at all? A shiver of sensation a tingle in a fingertip
That empty tasteless hollow feeling behind or in the ears 
some words are hard to follow and harder yet to find
Using them is easier than leaving them behind
In the walled wet halls of darkness 
By the looking glass of fears
Instinctive genuflection
Self reflective tears
Salty recollections
Chill cold years
Sharp honed
A shiver
Pain
It's gone again 
Or was it really
There
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Maverick Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 1:53 PM
Hello Donald pleased to read this featured poem" i was quite taken by your adventurous write; what use are questions and feelings if you can't raise them..? "Well done and well recieved"
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March 29, 2012 at 8:49 AM
congrats on your featured poem of the week
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March 28, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Donald. Love, Carol
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March 27, 2012 at 8:19 PM
wonderful poem and congrats on your feature...Patrick
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