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Lazy Snooze Alarm

The sun looked tired this morning Yawning stretched shadows over silent birds Teasing nighttimes sleeping flowers As its lazy snooze alarm hummed idly ©9/11/2023

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/11/2023 6:05:00 PM

Maybe the sun forgot to turn off its booze alarm last night as well...

Bill Baker

Date: 6/11/2023 5:29:00 PM

Good descriptions, John. I don't use an alarm clock any more, just get up when my body says I'm rested. Not sure we've met, not sure I've paid you a visit. But now that I have, I'll be following your poetry and getting to know you. Have a great week! Bill

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2023 5:49:00 AM

Lovely imagery John and least you dont have a cock (erel) to rouse you in the morning lol:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/11/2023 6:04:00 PM

Now, Jan! How would you know whether John has a cock (erel) or not?! ~ X. Rae Vision