Afolabi Muideen Poet Rhyme

Lazy Morning Rain

Lazy morning rain


Oh lazy rain
Oh lazy morning rain
Coming from the pervaded cloud
Encompasses the sky cloud
Why must you spoil this bright morning?
You delay those who are going
To their daily activities
You delay those who are seeking for jobs
Willing to study students are 
being dallied. you gave 
chance for lazy
One as you to smile, go away
Go away
You splatter upon the roof
As the sound thatchers thatching the roof
Your splash onto the windows give
Chance for cold to penetrate
A wailing cloud it's ok, you are wailing as if you will not
Wail another. You are not needed at this moment
People are shivering because of your present
Why don't you go and come at night?
Go away
Oh lazy rain
Go away
Oh lazy morning rain

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Robert Lindley July 29, 2015 at 8:55 PM Many times I have myself cursed the rain! And at other times prayed for it to come. Love this poem , if you live where monsoons flourish I feel for you my friend. I could picture such a downpour as I read your poem!

Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 6:23 PM the images are lovely A.M hugs 7

James Fraser July 24, 2015 at 2:30 PM Afolabi, since May 1st to date, nearly every day in it's 24 hour cycle it's rained here in Inverness. Your fine poetry reminds me of these past 2+ months. Wishing you a blessed weekend, James :)

Kp Nunez July 22, 2015 at 11:24 AM I love your subject! You always give a fresh perspective on all the subject you focus on, AM. Mail... hugs!

Noel Villarosa July 22, 2015 at 6:03 AM It's nice to see early rain passes just in time for anyone to catch the sunrise to do what he/she is supposed to accomplish. Well done. (^_^) Noel.

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2015 at 7:15 PM I feel exactly this way too when I am hoping for sun to enjoy. Good one, and do you know the American rhyme: Rain rain go away, little ANDIE wants to play! Rain rain go away, come again no other day!(actually I should say "another day" but you can make up the lines as you go with this one!)

Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2015 at 7:13 PM Did I ever tell you that I am A.M. too? (Andrea Miller!) maiden name!! Let me read this one now. thanks for your sweet comment

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2015 at 3:31 PM I like the emotive feel and descriptiveness of this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2015 at 12:53 PM i like the mood of this piece, afolabi.. been raining here too...huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis July 21, 2015 at 4:58 AM Well written dear friend, A.M., but rain, apart from causing all what you say, is also the heaven's blessing to mother earth! Afolabi Muideen July 21, 2015 at 6:38 AM It is nice to see you face here Sir, I really appreciate your comment, yes, rain is a blessing to this Earth, but every thing have it own negative including human even this world is a world of both N and P.......A.M.

Skat A July 20, 2015 at 10:44 PM OOO, I love Rain, it makes my day perfectly lazy. I love this. Afolabi. Send them clouds over here... Enjoyed, SKAT Afolabi Muideen July 21, 2015 at 6:03 AM Thank you for your love always SKAT I appreciate your comment, at times when it rain early morning, it gives some people who did not want to go to work or some students who did want to go to school chance to rest and play at home.........A.M.

Constance La France July 20, 2015 at 8:20 PM AM, oh that lazy rain, that's what I have right now and I love the sound and thanks for visiting my poetry Afolabi Muideen July 21, 2015 at 5:50 AM That is its habit, early in the morning when people are suppose to go to their daily activities that is when it will start to rain. Thank you for your comment........A.M.

Tim Smith July 20, 2015 at 8:17 PM Many times we crave the sun for her warmth...excellent Afolabi Muideen July 21, 2015 at 5:43 AM Yes we ofthe crave the sun we take our mind off the rain whereas they both have positive and negative side. Thank you.