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Lazy Haikus #1,042-1,045

Semi-sleepwalking Ev'ry day is déjà vu When my love's adrift --- Nashville to Kentucky The state line divides my heart So where lies my home? --- The journey stretches I'm like Kerouac, on the road Or Frost, miles to go...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2010 9:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 10:20:00 AM
Great expressiveness and descriptiveness in these Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2010 9:54:00 AM
Good title!
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Date: 2/23/2010 9:38:00 AM
I like the last one especially.. bg
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Date: 2/23/2010 9:38:00 AM
I like the last one especially.. bg
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