Jay Narain Poet Etheree

Lazy

My
bask in
July sun,
turns into yawns,
slumps in a long nap,
I wake up half asleep,
I want to blame someone else,
Is it the shade under the sun?
Is it my retired life and old age?
Why blame anyone, I had lots of fun.

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Speaks Volumes July 12, 2023 at 5:28 PM Wonderful Etheree my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen July 7, 2023 at 12:28 PM - This is how retirement life should be ...take a nap when you feel like it ... lovely written, Jay :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit July 7, 2023 at 6:17 AM That is what retirement is for. You earned it--enjoy life, Jay.

Valsa George July 6, 2023 at 8:30 PM At times there is fun in being a little lazy. At our age, a small nap can refresh us. There's no need for blaming anyone or a self reproach.

Sotto Poet July 6, 2023 at 12:26 PM Jay, your poem and description are truly beautiful. You have done an outstanding job.