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Laying the Foundations

To write to ensnare to weave a web of intrigue is it for one’s self? I’d rather be the devil than steal true loves innocence. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Bl Devnath

Date: 1/14/2014 1:37:00 AM

It's a nice thought provoking poem. I need time to feel in deep of it. Visionary, encountered here. Lovely done. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Donna Jones

Date: 1/2/2014 5:26:00 PM

Makes one think Harry...great poem....happy new year and thank you for your friendship in 2013..

Karen Anglesey

Date: 1/1/2014 11:46:00 PM

Simple and lovely thoughts expressed. Nice creativity :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2014 4:34:00 PM

harry, I can't remember if I wished you a happy new year, but you are someone who truly deserves it. Thanks for all your support of my poetry last year. I hope this year we will both be brimming with poetry.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/31/2013 5:43:00 PM

thought- ptovoking and rich in meaning, harry.. glorious write in just a few llines; wonderful.. happy new year!.. huggs

Erich Goller

Date: 12/31/2013 2:51:00 PM

that's a very nice expressed Tanka poem.. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Erich. Happy New Year 2014!

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2013 12:55:00 PM

Hi Harry, stopping in with Happy Cheers for a wonderful New year. hugs and love ~ SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/31/2013 4:24:00 AM

- Hi Harry,this is a beautiful poem. - Just a few words to you the last day of the year 2013 - Looking forward to a nice friendship and many new poems from you in the new year 2014! - I wish you and your family all the best for the new year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Peranteau

Date: 12/30/2013 3:57:00 PM

Mr. Horsman, your Tanka here so true to it's form ! I pray that the eccentrics of a poets ensnaring thoughts cause you not; rot. It is easier to spit, than, to clean it's spill ! *smiles* Intriguing write dear poet ! Have a wonderfully blessed New Year ! Much love, james