Laying Into Sensation

Laying into sensation, 
not thinking,
feeling, just feel. 
We share touching 
each others damp spots, 
weave in moist hair, 
open passages into darkness, 
release fragrances deep from the earth; 
your fingers move
my fingers, 
then push,
now it’s done 
and there’s nowhere to go 
except inside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 12:09 AM
WOW!!
Jordan Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Thanks... I needed that! J
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