Layers of Bricks

Most go into a relationship protecting and guarding their heart
I do the opposite, mine is open wide right from the start
Others have built bricks around theirs, that have to be torn down
I slowly put up a layer each time a hurt makes me frown

With each rejection, disappointment, another layer gets laid
It's beyond my control, swish, swish goes the spade
Unkind words, untruths, the layer of bricks climb higher     
Until my heart is safely buried away from the crossfire 

Now protected by the bricks, I become emotionally detached
Only now able to see why we were inevitably mismatched
People love in different ways and have different needs
Next time I'll find a matching heart, before I plant my seeds

In time, the bricks surrounding my heart will turn to clay
Then dissolve into dust, for I'm too optimistic to live in dismay
The dust will be eventually blown away by someone with a open heart
And thus be the reason why every other relationship has fallen apart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nunez Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Sincerity written all over this. One can relateto what you've written, Ces. Lovely! Kim
Lindley Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on your win!!
Gasun Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 1:40 AM
A brilliant write my dear friend Cecilia. I think I can relate here.:)) I like every line esp. people love in different ways ....Congratulations on a stunning write which I extremely enjoyed and your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora
Sietesantos Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations, Cecilia, on a great well-deserved win!
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 12:29 AM
Quite powerful write, Cecilia and congrats on the win,
Dey Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:47 PM
Bold writing...Cogratulations
A   Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Cecilia,, Congratulations, thank you EVER SO SO much... Keep Enjoying my contest, and my latest blog "Some Poems Are:" if you like. See you around, :) LINDA
Hunter Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 6:52 AM
Lay those bricks under your feet instead...give ya something solid to stand on...:) I really like this poem, Cecilia. I enjoy these kind of metaphors and you used it very well.
Johnson Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 4:52 PM
attraction can change with the beat of the heart, when what we imagined was wrong from the start....but we play... great poetry babe...
Carrillo Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 6:25 AM
Cecilia; I likwe this very much. People do try to protect their hearts all kind of ways. Me - I locked mine under a thousand keys so no one could ever hurt it again. I even wrote a poem about that, but don't know what I did with it. thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
Kearley Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Ho-ho! You are really putting it out there! Another fine write. :o)
Sheppard Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 6:01 AM
Cecilia you're breaking my heart You're shaking my confidence daily Lol beautiful writing from a beautiful lady :)
Anglesey Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 6:58 PM
This is very creative using the bricks around the heart. A great poem on the ups and downs of the heart and love. Nice work :)
Manassian Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 12:19 AM
Oh Cecilia...we are SO on the same page! :) Yes...I do the same. Sometimes I revert to numbing myself, other times I say...what the heck! This is me and I let it all show! Wonderful poem, and to my favs it goes! Hugs!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 7:14 PM
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Horstkotter Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Very nice poem.
Phillips Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 2:57 PM
Hi Cecilia, I love this poem it grabbed my attention from start to finish. Nice experiment with words, besides there is some truth in this piece.Well done.
Hicks Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 12:33 AM
Seems like sound advice! This was very well put together and you carried out he metaphor superbly. Nice to see you posting something new :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 5:57 PM
What a treat to read a new poem from you. This is very emotional and well expressed. I hope romance and love are once again a welcome and considerate guest. You deserve to be with someone who appreciates your amazing heart. Hugs Rick
Moore Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 5:35 PM
that was a good read
Horsman Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 3:42 PM
this is truly amazing poetry, and one i can openly relate to
Hendricks Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Simply beautiful poetry, Cecilia. I like, very much. Licia :-)
De Paz Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 9:52 AM
It is true. Living with people is not always a positive experience and layers of bricks are necessary to defend our mental health. However, with this poetry you open again your heart to a sincere relation. I lke this optimistic view
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 2:34 AM
- Cecilia ..... beautifully written, touching. - Wish you all the best. - Have a superb weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 12:12 AM
what an excellent finish you put on this one. It started out sad but ended so hopeful. Very good attitude to have, my friend!!
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