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Lay Down Be Still

Lay Down Be Still

I am not responsible, 
for what happened to you. 
You are accountable;
to what happened to me. 
That was and is still a fact. 

You had what ever reason, 
suited you at the time. 
You traded away...
all that you could have had, 
for all that you;
felt safe and close to. 
In the end, 
it was not warm or soft, 
but cold and spiny. 

You cheated.
and played the game badly. 
You are angry, but it matters little. 
The pain that you expressed, 
missed its mark, 
and landed on the innocent, 
and deniably un-defend-able. 

You will pay in coins, 
silver...
similar to those paid,
the night, 
He was betrayed. 
You will be paid, 
for your services, 
again, 
when you have been...
found, 
less; but made whole, 
by forgiveness, 
unasked but expressed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Babcock Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Enjoyed your poem and we all pay for what we do in life. love phyl
Foster Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:27 PM
Not all, but most. In the end, all are accountable... true... Merry Christmas my friend. Blessings on your New Year... Ann
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 10:58 AM
"You cheated. and played the game badly. " I had to say hooray when I arrived at this line.
Foster Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Me too... The truth always comes out. Hugs... Ann
Dutta Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 1:21 AM
Each must pay for own activities. That's Law of Nature. Nicely penned.
Foster Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Sometimes the level is not true...but circumstance returns for a second chance every now and then... Merry Christmas and God Bless you and your family. Happy New Year. Ann
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