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Laws of Attraction

Souls roaming about
relevance echoed in Hearts
minds filled to the brim.

Aspirations ever sparked
alive in the shrine of Life.


August 17th, 2018

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/11/2018 1:34:00 AM

Wonderful. The shrine of life. Thank you, Kai

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/13/2018 3:47:00 AM

Wonderful is your feedback! Thank you so much for your generous and appreciative comment. My honour and pleasure. Be blessed always.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/2/2018 7:15:00 PM

Astounding poetry, Lady Besma!! From beginning to end, a sumptuous poetic edible delight. You have a beautiful mind. Shine of Life ... wow! Great Tanka poem. Supernova bright write. Love and peace always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/13/2018 3:46:00 AM

My words fail to render my deepest delight, honour and gratitude! Outshining and touching are your praising words! Thank you so much Freddie for the honour and reward.. my deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/24/2018 2:07:00 AM

I love reading when such short verse tells such long wisdom's!!!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/3/2018 12:08:00 PM

And I take a great delight reading such a rewarding feedback from a highly talented and appreciated poet! My honour and pleasure Arthur, thank you so much. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2018 8:14:00 AM

If only we all could be inspired to the good. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/11/2018 10:56:00 AM

Hope so Sara! There is still beauty in the world! Me too, a pleasure to read your work of art. Be blessed always

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2018 8:47:00 AM

Lovely Besma, lovely poem.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/25/2018 10:11:00 AM

My pleasure Richard! I'm very delighted to read your generous and lovely feedback! Thank you so much. Be blessed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/22/2018 2:45:00 PM

Dear Besma, your poetry glows from within with golden shine and ethereal luster that attracts this ardent reader to fill my being to the brim with your divine poetic gems.. the beauty of souls connecting through shared attraction and love that vibrated within hearts and minds in mortal life who then seek to share eternal life is breathtaking. A deep and mesmerizing poem from your soulful and emotional depths of spirituality and loveliness. Exquisite, enlightening and graceful poetry. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always dearest Besma.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/22/2018 8:23:00 PM

Likewise, my dear friend, my soul is attracted to your shining spirit and inspired artistry as well.. I have no doubt that our souls will seek each other to celebrate eternal life as we did in mortal being.. we are part of the same circle and your beautiful thoughts move me deeply. Be blessed always dearest Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/22/2018 4:29:00 PM

Dear Susan, I have told you before that I'm blessed to have you on the path of my heart, mind and poetry.. your generous heart.. your open, enlightened and enlightening mind.. your fabulous and enchanting poetry attracted my soul.. It is God's wisdom, grace and blessing to be endowed with the ability to love and venerate souls of refined qualities.. I'm so much moved by your generous words Susan..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/22/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for sharing the passion of feeling words. My deepest regards love and hugs. Be blessed always.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/20/2018 11:14:00 PM

And we are attracted to your verse, Besma...well executed my friend...love & light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/22/2018 9:36:00 AM

Oh thank you so much Winged Warrior! A pleasure in heart and a smile on face when reading your generous feedback. Be blessed always.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2018 3:40:00 PM

The power of mutual attraction; wonderful to experience or behold, Besma...as long as it does not turn into 'fatal attraction'~ Regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/22/2018 9:33:00 AM

Absolutely, I do agree with you Paul. Thank you so much for your honourable visit and gracious feedback. So much elated. My best regards. Be blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/20/2018 3:03:00 AM

Deep spiritual poem echoing the yearning of soul mates to unite after roaming into eternity dear, Besma! A wondrous Tanka that I happily Fave!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/20/2018 11:35:00 AM

My honour and pleasure dear Demetrios.. so delighted to read your generous praising feedback! Thank you so much for the value you give to my humble write.

Maria Williams

Date: 8/19/2018 2:29:00 AM

A gem of a poem dearest Besma and a fave for me....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/19/2018 1:15:00 PM

Dear Maria, good to see you! You have been tremendously missed! My great pleasure to read your cheering feedback. Thank you so much dear. Love and hugs. Be blessed.