Karen Jones Poet Free verse

Lavender Liquid Love

Stick with me like caramel 
Feel as colorful or colorless
As your mood dictates

Watching the sun rise
In your electric eyes
Makes my heart smile

I need your lavender liquid love 
Like plants need water 
I love you sweetheart 

No matter how slow
The seasons roll
Time is measured by your attention 

Sun rises orange in your arms
Mid day craves sun high on brown face
Sun sets red to black caressing back

And the moon swoons sensually 
Just above the horizon and we
Fall so deep into a peaceful sleep

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Hilda Greenhough February 22, 2024 at 9:59 PM Poem flows romantically as it travels through the day. This was a fabulous verse of love Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 10:01 PM Hilda I appreciate you reading and your comments hugs

Christopher Delegans February 22, 2024 at 9:20 PM Love the descriptive nature of this poem. The connections of natural elements to emotion are great. Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 9:23 PM Kind of you to comment Christopher thanks!

Robert Schatz February 22, 2024 at 5:59 PM A captivating poem Karen. I love "Sun rises orange in your arms" and the unexpected sensuality and serenity of the last verse Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 6:05 PM I appreciate your comment Robert! Thanks

Sotto Poet February 22, 2024 at 11:16 AM This remarkable poem exudes an extraordinary essence, surpassing all expectations. Karen, your eloquent verses have reached unparalleled heights in this masterpiece. Your artistry effortlessly transports me on a profound odyssey, unraveling the tapestry of the day. May divine blessings grace each of your future endeavors, dear friend. Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 1:17 PM What a gift you have with words and how kind you are in your comments. Thank you.

Heidi Sands February 22, 2024 at 9:30 AM This is a beautiful , loving journey through the day. So very nice :) Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 9:56 AM Thank you Heidi. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2024 at 8:25 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a wonderful ending. Have a blessed day writing away.......... Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 9:19 AM Thank you Paula! Blessings

Jerry Brotherton February 22, 2024 at 6:16 AM A beautiful poem, Karen. I love the way your words take me on a journey through the day. May all your days be blessed, my friend. Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 7:31 AM You are as sweet as sugar thanks so much Jerry! It means the world to me that you read my poems and even read my humble short story! You are so kind to be supportive and I appreciate you! Blessings returned!

Victor Buhagiar February 22, 2024 at 6:04 AM Hope I understood this poem. I consider it a perfume which I never use. Good thing it can send you to sleep peacefully. Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 7:28 AM You are hilarious even if you didn’t understand! lol but the poem is not necessarily about perfume. lol love potion number nine of sorts is created naturally if you get my drift but I hope you view and enjoy the poem in the manner that best suits you and doesn’t embarrass. Hugs dear Victor

Ink Empress February 22, 2024 at 2:39 AM How beautiful is this! Just gorgeous! So well expressed and so well delivered really. One of my new faves from you this is i especially loved the lines “I need your lavender liquid love Like plants need water I love you sweetheart “ how touching and soulfully poetic, pleasure reading you after a long time. Sending you light always Karen Jones February 22, 2024 at 4:01 AM Ink Empress you are so kind and I am honored you fav it. Thank you and love and light to you. Hugs