Isaiah Zerbst Poet Sijo

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Lavender Flowers- Visual 6

Misted clouds of lavender petals brush our bare feet softly,
But the vibrant flowers are faded and whithered to brown shells
Compared with how my heart beams like a rainbow when we're together.

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Nandita Das March 30, 2015 at 9:41 AM How can such beauty flow from a pen? Pure magic. Awesome.

Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:46 PM Isaiah, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2015 at 1:42 AM Ah that's so lovely Isaiah,, my fav visual but i couldn't say a thing,, a perfect 7 to u,, Congrats on big win!

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2015 at 3:34 PM Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:26 PM Dropping back with my congrats Isaiah:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 8:53 AM This is a masterful write! Congratulations.

Paul Callus February 8, 2015 at 7:40 AM Lovely take you have captured from this lavender visual, Isaiah! I like the imagery and the romantic atmosphere. Congrats on a worthy win. All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:05 AM Isaiah, I love the imagery of that first line. it's gorgeous. You chose a picture that I thought was so pretty because lavender is my favorite color. Congrats in my contest.

Casarah Nance January 31, 2015 at 6:26 PM Your words are wonderful!

Jan Allison January 31, 2015 at 6:18 PM We chose the same visual again Isaiah! Stunning imagery and so beautifully romantic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 from me of course:-)

Poesy Relish January 31, 2015 at 1:01 PM a truly beautiful pen... nad!

Charmaine Chircop January 31, 2015 at 10:33 AM I can smell the perfumed scent of lavender ,and it fills me with serenity..Beautiful and romantic.I wonder if Rosetta was watching : ): ))