Get Your Premium Membership

Laundry Day

I'm pulling the rug out, out from under your feet. You're going to regret that you didn't savor the sweet. And by the time you realize... Realize where you went wrong... By that time already, my scent will be gone. It will take you a moment, for it to gradually sink in. But like tomorrow... it'll come. And you will wonder where I've been. Where I've gone... But I'm leaving a dress behind. The one with the muddy foot print. So by the, "pulling the rug"... You will know what I meant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/29/2010 6:36:00 PM
Oh, my, this was incredible! The lines about leaving the dress with the muddy footprints behind said loud and clear to me that there is not going to be any more walking over you! I love the statement this poem makes. Strong, powerful write!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/12/2010 12:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today Amy. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/11/2010 1:43:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Amy...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/11/2010 12:00:00 PM
very nice get rid of that dirty laundry nice one faleshia
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs