Laundry

Laundry, odor, stink
Parmesan cheese, fungus, dirt
Bleach, washing powders


(Let me Haiku you from a grandmother's point of view.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Another little gem Sara >> James
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 7:04 AM
Sara, I think this one would be GREAT (for the contest). Every single word is a noun, and though one is being used as an adj., it can also stand alone as a noun. I am always so fixated on grammar, that is why I avoided this one. I was taking his rules very technically. And hardly anybody in the contest has EVERY single word being actually USED as a noun. This one is near perfection, if that is what he is going for!! Also, I love the topic and the great description of this. Luv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 6:51 PM
As one Grandma to another I totally understand your Haiku... great use of words Sara... enjoyed.. and can totally relate ... having four sons and grandkids too...sometimes washer overload...haha.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 3:15 PM
you can come do my laundry too!! ha ha.
Freeman Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Smile, yes should have a part in this Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Freeman Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Smile, yes should have a part in this Sara. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Thekidster Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Great Haiku written by you. Nice read Sara. Best Wishes Always, Bill - Soup Mail
Pickett Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Souds like a fun-filled day....:].......:JP]
Richards Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Oh yes....as mothers, we have seen it all!! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 8:15 AM
We get your point Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Cheeseman Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 6:29 AM
You ladies never know when your well off Ha! Ha! Daniel
George   Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 5:50 AM
A Great all noun Haiku, Sara. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today. Love, Lainie
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