Laughter Minichu

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In crisis, true men smile, Oh, sweet smile your warmness is prized, whispers the soul. Strengthen style give life a chance smile and the sun for your console lean dance laughed, loured called for his bowl, soured In crisis, true men smile, smile and the sun for your console soured

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I Am Anaya

Date: 9/14/2023 10:42:00 AM

Elequently subtle, "In crisis, true men smile" your laughter has a message. Congratulations on your win, S.P.!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 6:43:00 AM

So nicely written Las! Congratulations! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/14/2023 6:16:00 AM

Such an elegant write, everything you write is so poetic and worthy of all the accolades my friend, i loved reading this . Congratulations on being a winner too sounds like a challenging form youv done so well. “In crisis true men smile” what a line

Mohan Chutani

Date: 9/14/2023 5:56:00 AM

SP, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/14/2023 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Mohan, appreciate you reaching placing and commenting on my short poem.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/27/2023 6:55:00 PM

Excellent poem, But if I never look at another Minichu, it will be too soon, Including yours dear SP. BOL in the contest. it will do well.