Laughing Showers



dripping hastily
with wet, laughing whispers
rain silences grief









Lets get creative with haiku poetry contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
March 19, 2021

rainstormhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

February 22, 2022 at 9:06 AM

Good one. I enjoyed reading this winner today. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Constance La France

March 24, 2021 at 3:24 PM

Gina, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this wonderful non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance

Kim Merryman

March 22, 2021 at 4:38 PM

A lovely haiku, Gina! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2021 at 2:19 PM

Great personificiation, dearie! Congrats to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 22, 2021 at 12:57 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

March 20, 2021 at 5:49 AM

bravo ~ lovely, Gina ~

Brian Sambourne

March 19, 2021 at 7:23 PM

Such a superb Haiku. The final line startles with its reversal of expectations. A joy to read. Best wishes, Brian

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 19, 2021 at 6:01 PM

Brilliant Haiku dearest, Gina! Blessings and love!

Susan Ashley

March 19, 2021 at 8:24 AM

Dear Gina, the soothing beauty of your haiku takes my breath away. A vivid moment captured by your glorious pen. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my dear friend.. ~Susan