Laughing Devil Saddens Me On Happy a Occasion

Was having gala time with friends in Niece's marriage function 
Spirited friends thought of having bhang* for fun of rarity 
Greedy of mild floater effect, scary of hangover, finally gave in for fun 
Toast raised with glass of 'bhang', few more and began party  
Intoxicated, Laughing Monster seized me, laughed with insanity 
Friends tried all to normalise laughing tantrum 
But monstrous laugh only gained momentum 

Panic mounted, as I was summoned by Panditji*for marriage ritual  
As a maternal unclr, had to perform customary ritual with bride-groom  
Stuck with intoxicated laugh, but serious was ritual, embarrassed one and all   
Gained normalcy post ceremony, cursed self, all fired, pity having no room  
Pledged never to indulge in bhang, took a life-time vow soon 
Marriage album without my ritual snap, still condemns me  
Memory of laughing devil, on happy a occasion still saddens me  
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PS (*) :
a) Bhang - Indian hemp, a milk concoction, having potential of ***** intoxication 
& narcotic effect. Intoxication high results in mad indulgence of repetitive action 
for many hours. The action, one is engaged in at the beginning time of knock-out 
state perpetuates for many hours e.g if one was laughing... he will continue to 
laugh for many hours....   

b) Panditji – Priest performing marriage ritual

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Rhyme scheme : a-b-a-b-b-c-c

( Entry for Members contest – The Devil made me do it by Thvia Shetley)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/28/2010 9:20:00 AM
@Sara @Dane - Thnx for nice comments. ..Bhang, if strong, is really intoxicating .. Luv/best wishes ...Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:49:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this interestiing write.. If based on truth, I have learned something new (Bhang)..I was delighted that you stopped by and commented on my work..Sara
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:12:00 AM
Laughing Devil...good one! Certainly, you have been forgiven by your family...time to forgive yourself when you look back at the pictures. Just tell yourself, "The devil made me do it!" Funny story...sorry for the associated sadness, though. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/25/2010 5:29:00 AM
@Susan........thnx ...Luv/best wishes ... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 4:40:00 AM
scary alright!
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Date: 10/25/2010 12:46:00 AM
Thnx for guidance.....Rhyme Scheme indicated... Pls see my reply to your soup mail.... Luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:14:00 AM
Soup Mail!!!!!
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