Laughing Attacks

I can't breath
tears rolling down my cheeks
i rock back and forth
calm down, sam
they say hugging me telling me everything is okay.
but they dont understand me
i'm not crying
i'm laughing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gass Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 5:29 PM
Isn't it funny how some things just make you laugh that hard. This is good. I think it is a deep write. How's Justin doing? Good, I hope. Love Robin
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 6:48 AM
Cleverly done Sam! Strange how delirious laughter can bring tears... Best wishes, Keith
Matheny Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 4:55 PM
Go on to this website called Espin and tell me what you think
Loving Iii Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 2:52 PM
deew dit dot did do do do do da do da do da do don't worry be happy
Martin Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 8:51 PM
very good write you know you have talent.
Matheny Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 4:20 PM
That's cool but we can still talk on here can't we?
Matheny Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 2:50 PM
dude are you goin to call me back anytime soon?
Matheny Avatar
November 7, 2008 at 1:07 PM
HI. . . HeHeHe!
Wölf Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 1:55 PM
hi ..........What do you want???
Matheny Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:22 PM
NO I PROMISE TO GOD AND ON MY FAMILY AND MY OWN LIFE!!!!!!!
Matheny Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:18 PM
Wil you go back out with and only me and you. . . I now realize that YOU are the ONLY ONE for ME. . .
Matheny Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:15 PM
Hey Cutie? Can I ask you something and you promise that you won't get defensive about it?
Wölf Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 4:08 PM
holy crap! that happens to me like probably every other day....painful though. very funny story.....-WÖLF
Perkins Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 3:20 PM
theyre easier to play, but they cost a lot more. but yea. so how old are you?
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