Laughing Attacks

I can't breath
tears rolling down my cheeks
i rock back and forth
calm down, sam
they say hugging me telling me everything is okay.
but they dont understand me
i'm not crying
i'm laughing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/10/2008 5:29:00 PM
Isn't it funny how some things just make you laugh that hard. This is good. I think it is a deep write. How's Justin doing? Good, I hope. Love Robin
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Date: 12/7/2008 6:48:00 AM
Cleverly done Sam! Strange how delirious laughter can bring tears... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/18/2008 4:55:00 PM
Go on to this website called Espin and tell me what you think
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Date: 11/17/2008 2:52:00 PM
deew dit dot did do do do do da do da do da do don't worry be happy
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Date: 11/13/2008 8:51:00 PM
very good write you know you have talent.
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Date: 11/10/2008 4:20:00 PM
That's cool but we can still talk on here can't we?
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Date: 11/7/2008 2:50:00 PM
dude are you goin to call me back anytime soon?
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Date: 11/7/2008 1:07:00 PM
HI. . . HeHeHe!
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Date: 11/6/2008 1:55:00 PM
hi ..........What do you want???
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:22:00 PM
NO I PROMISE TO GOD AND ON MY FAMILY AND MY OWN LIFE!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:18:00 PM
Wil you go back out with and only me and you. . . I now realize that YOU are the ONLY ONE for ME. . .
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:15:00 PM
Hey Cutie? Can I ask you something and you promise that you won't get defensive about it?
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Date: 11/4/2008 4:08:00 PM
holy crap! that happens to me like probably every other day....painful though. very funny story.....-WÖLF
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Date: 11/4/2008 3:20:00 PM
theyre easier to play, but they cost a lot more. but yea. so how old are you?
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