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Laugh Out Louder

news depresses friends
tall tales hurt their funny bone
go tickle a lie

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Bill Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 9:03:00 PM

Creative thoughts in a fine Senryu, my friend. I see below congratulations are in order! WTG, David. Have a great week! Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2024 1:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Well, sometimes the truth hurts, but tell a good story so to say and it lifts spirits or as in news it can conquer or divide. Thanks for sharing this bit of wisdom with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/9/2024 9:17:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun read again. Laugh today... Have a blessed day writing away...................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2024 11:25:00 AM

David. I think I did not quite understand your total idea and yet it looked SO good, especially that last line. Very clever there. Congrats and thanks for your participation.

David Fisher
Date: 1/8/2024 5:41:00 PM

Thanks for the challenge of the contest. My theme was on people still watching the news for truth(lol). They get upset with the lies(little or large) that are mostly used to persuade or divide. I wish they'd learn to laugh off the 'news sales pitch', and search for truth elsewhere.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/7/2024 6:43:00 PM

No shortage of lies to tickle these days. David, you are a great talent from what I can see. I look forward to going back through your work. Seems like you have been doing this for a while. It is fun. Thanks for being here!!

David Fisher
Date: 1/8/2024 5:43:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words and comments on some of my other work!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/5/2024 8:39:00 AM

Hi David… great point! Tickle a lie in poetic terms is clever. By thre waem thank you fir reading me. Bless you Sincerely . Pangiee Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/4/2024 7:10:00 PM

Amen to Kim's comments. ~ Mor(e)t Sahl(t)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/4/2024 6:29:00 PM

Tickled pink, a very amusing Senryu David… Belle

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/4/2024 10:24:00 AM

An awesome senryu my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/3/2024 7:51:00 PM

This was one enjoyable crazy senryu. Humor is good.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/3/2024 10:21:00 AM

I've noticed many people will believe a lie before they will accept the truth. This is cute and more truthful than you'd think. Nice job. It made me smile and I need one today. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/3/2024 8:50:00 AM

What a creative/fun write. To laugh is better for one and to cry. So laugh today... Have a blessed day writing away............