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Laugh Loser

There was a stand-up joke maker Whose act was a crowd shaker. She was highly hilarious But found to be nefarious. Now her fans in hordes forsaker.

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/12/2015 8:20:00 PM

Not a sailor myself nor a true lover of the sea, although I live walking distance from the Atlantic. Like the wordplay in the last line "forsake." Takes imagination to do that, you know. Enjoyed reading it. / M

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/14/2015 10:20:00 PM

I'm grateful, Maurice, for your kind comment. You write limericks as well as anyone I know, and so your response is especially gratifying. All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/9/2015 11:01:00 AM

humourous but tinged with sadness at the end Paul :-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/9/2015 1:30:00 AM

Very good one Paul. Sadly this may well be true too.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/9/2015 8:08:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. I value and appreciate your thoughtful comment. I hope all is well with you and those you hold dear.