Probir Gupta Poet Verse

Latitude

Letters wait in grey clouds

Loving lilting lisping

Looking for the rhymes of

Lovely leaves of olive

Lungs relaxed in blue breath 

Laughing cups of pink time

Longing for a lush rain

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April 16, 2017

Pleiades L contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Mark Martin April 27, 2017 at 12:30 PM Congratulations on your win Probir! Like the idea of letters waiting in clouds! :-) Probir Gupta April 27, 2017 at 11:45 PM Thank you so much, Mark ...

Eileen Manassian April 20, 2017 at 1:48 AM :) Congrats on your win with this refreshing piece. Lots of L's to liven the lines. ;) Probir Gupta April 20, 2017 at 9:08 AM Thanks for the encouraging comment ...

Kim Merryman April 19, 2017 at 10:05 PM Beautiful imagery, Probir and great alliteration! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Probir Gupta April 20, 2017 at 9:11 AM A joy, Kim, to participate in your Pleiades contest ... Thank you for considering the poem for a placement ...

Darren White April 19, 2017 at 2:49 PM I still like this Pleiades of yours very much, you used even far more L than was asked, and still managed to write a flowing poem. Probir Gupta April 20, 2017 at 9:18 AM Thank you, Darren ...

Eve Roper April 18, 2017 at 7:49 PM Nicely done, Probir, congratulations on your win Hugs Probir Gupta April 20, 2017 at 9:19 AM Thank you, Eve ...

Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2017 at 4:04 PM Congrats, Probir! Probir Gupta April 20, 2017 at 9:20 AM Thank you, ... Congratulations on your success too ...

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2017 at 1:31 AM - Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta April 18, 2017 at 8:45 AM Thank you, Anne ...

Lisa Ricci April 17, 2017 at 5:27 PM Hello Probir. Wow. This is lovely. It glides and flows. I enjoyed the imagery. I believe you have met the contest requirements. Your words give graceful meaning to latitude. Good luck with the contest. Well done Probir Gupta April 18, 2017 at 8:48 AM Thank you so much, Lisa for your nice comment ... As is seen in the above comment of Sunshine, it has got a place ...

Demetrios Trifiatis April 17, 2017 at 4:57 AM Mother of all Pleiades dear, Probir! A 7 for certain my friend! Probir Gupta April 18, 2017 at 8:51 AM Well ! ... MOAB is in circulation, courtesy Trump ... You have brought in MOAP ! ... Thank you ...

Charlie Smith April 16, 2017 at 8:52 AM Lovely Probir, best wishes... Probir Gupta April 18, 2017 at 8:53 AM Thank you, Charlie ...

Jan Allison April 16, 2017 at 8:27 AM a rainbow of colour in your lines Probir:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Probir Gupta April 18, 2017 at 8:54 AM Thank you, Jan