Latitude

Letters wait in grey clouds Loving lilting lisping Looking for the rhymes of Lovely leaves of olive Lungs relaxed in blue breath Laughing cups of pink time Longing for a lush rain ________________________________ April 16, 2017 Pleiades L contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Probir! Like the idea of letters waiting in clouds! :-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/27/2017 11:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mark ...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/20/2017 1:48:00 AM

:) Congrats on your win with this refreshing piece. Lots of L's to liven the lines. ;)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2017 9:08:00 AM

Thanks for the encouraging comment ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2017 10:05:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Probir and great alliteration! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2017 9:11:00 AM

A joy, Kim, to participate in your Pleiades contest ... Thank you for considering the poem for a placement ...

Darren White

Date: 4/19/2017 2:49:00 PM

I still like this Pleiades of yours very much, you used even far more L than was asked, and still managed to write a flowing poem.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2017 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Darren ...

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2017 7:49:00 PM

Nicely done, Probir, congratulations on your win Hugs

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2017 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, Eve ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 4:04:00 PM

Congrats, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/20/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, ... Congratulations on your success too ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/18/2017 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Anne ...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/17/2017 5:27:00 PM

Hello Probir. Wow. This is lovely. It glides and flows. I enjoyed the imagery. I believe you have met the contest requirements. Your words give graceful meaning to latitude. Good luck with the contest. Well done

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/18/2017 8:48:00 AM

Thank you so much, Lisa for your nice comment ... As is seen in the above comment of Sunshine, it has got a place ...