Later Than Usual

Later Than Usual 
 
Stars are out tonight
wheeling sky across blue bright satellites
glancing up
distance shading trees to silhouette 
pinpoints lighting leaves 
echoing in wavering branch
 
Fluid mist forms breath into bark
ahead trees float in orange tinted neon
fixed to the ground a cloud of motion
approaching formed by sculptured nature
kissed beauty by its rapture
 
Revolving to see celestial above 
rotating cycle beneath the wood
and upward pointing the aiming torch light
just to site a tiny focused reality
returning this my flash fed battery 
laughing at seeming inadequacy
of aiming my light at the stars

Stumbling in the gloom
dampened grass throngs these steps 
these whispering nouns of light cosset us
meandering back to our rooms
passing trees thinking of you
wishing to be by your side
 
Knowing sees with such intuitive ease
between scattered enigmatic and sky
listening between leaves
to a language as it breaths
implementing all of this it would seem
even the warmth between our hands
 
These crisp clear nights can be so full
filled with so much more 
undiminished it endures
but still feels detracted without you
 
Yet this walk home is later than usual 
imparting some essence of sentience
delicately you hang in your eyes
voicing a listening readily recognised
this space reverberating through me
every inch of you
in the stillness of the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/6/2008 4:08:00 PM
Colin this is an exceptional write. Wow Terrific I got goose bumps. This is awsome. I can relate to the starry nights in California I write about them and relate this piece of Love and heartache. kThank you for taking me there in a thought and a memory you made my night. God bless you and yours. Michael Torres
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