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Late Summer

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Theme: Memory
Emotion: Hope
Color: Gold
Season: Late Summer
Form: Free Verse
Object: Lantern
Verb: Remember

As the snow melts on the mountain And a trickle began to fill the fountain Filling the drained spring below Then the river begins to flow Snow on the mountain A fire in the hearth Snow on the mountain Losing you broke my heart I remember when our love was young Sometimes the lights would go out We'd light the lantern to see how to walk But never has it snowed this early before That snow covered the gold poplar All the leaves turned brown and fell This shouldn't happen in late summer But on this we couldn't dwell Snow on the moutain A fire in the hearth Snow on the mountain Losing you broke my heart Your hair was thin and white Your hearing had disappeared But you kept going and going Until your health disappeared Snow on the mountain A fire in the hearth Snow on the mountain Losing you broke my heart I know we'll meet again my love Jesus is waiting for me to come home That will be a great reunion Happiness we'll all share
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George Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 9:07 PM
"That will be a great reunion Happiness we'll all share".... This is what we all hope. In God's kingdom, we will get united with our dear ones, gone ahead of us. A lovely poem dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2026 at 4:45 AM
Everyone who has accepted Jesus as their Savior, the King of Kings, and the One Who died and rose again now seated on the throne will be there. I feel there are many here on soup who have the faith so even though we might not meet in this life, we will meet in heaven. Thank you for the understanding review of my work. Sara K. 👍👏
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:28 PM
You are really getting into these challenges
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 5:09 AM
Well, Andrea, I have successfully written one yet. Thank you for dropping by. 👍. Sara K.
Rolland Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 11:57 PM
waiting for, Have a nice day
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 5:40 AM
Sorry, I did not have one ready, Yann. I will have to get on with trying to write it. Might not happen today though. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K. 👍
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