Late One Night

Was there more to her 
  than met the eye
She kept to herself
  We all wondered why

Her smile fairly sparkled
  So did her hair
Yet none of us knew
  what went on in there

She answered most questions
  with just a yes or a no
Wore last decade's fashions    
  from her head to her toe

Late one night, though,
  I saw her alone in the park
swaying to strange strains
  I couldn't hear in the dark

Stock still did I stand
  when of a sudden 
she stumbled ---
  I blurted out, "You alright?"

At the sound of my voice
  she screamed and she fled
Apparently'd hurt herself
  The ground badly bled

No surprise the next morning
  Her absence from class
But I was shocked to find out
  that nobody knew 
     she'd been out and about

alone in the park the previous night
  that she fell and took flight
Was I the only one who had seen
  what had been, the drama play out

   Or was what I'd sure witnessed
      the mere shadow of doubt

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Date: 3/11/2020 12:10:00 PM
This is so mysterious and thought provoking - we don't know what's in another's heart - did this really happen to you?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2020 8:45:00 PM
This is pure fiction. Stuff like this never happened or happens to me. All for the best! :) gw
Date: 3/9/2020 4:14:00 PM
The ending is perfecto.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2020 8:44:00 PM
Muchas gracias, senora! ~ Senor Gershon
Date: 3/8/2020 7:16:00 PM
enjoyed the story, Gershon, a student possible for a night fling
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2020 3:38:00 PM
Glad you liked the story, Eve! :) gw
Date: 3/8/2020 8:36:00 AM
There is suspense in the air.. What happen to her? Leave your shadow of doubts and reveal the truth.. lol.. Nice story Gershon..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2020 12:41:00 PM
So much suspense, this one needs to wear suspenders. LOL. Thanks, my friend! :) gw
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